Sometimes I Call Myself

Sometimes I call myself shipwreck,
Suddenly static, stagnant,
Somehow less than a person, a fragment
And everything moves in slow motion.

Sometimes I call myself abandoned building,
Viciously vacant, vapid
My mind is cloudy, heartbeat rapid,
And it all gets too quiet.

Sometimes I call myself time bomb,
Terrifyingly tameless, thinning,
My hands are trembling, my world is spinning,
And I am growing afraid of my own mind.

Sometimes I call myself human,
Halfway happy, healing,
My heart is sealing, true identity revealing,
And I have learned to call myself....better.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Scars Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 12:08 PM
Wow Sara! loved the power in this one! very moving sweet Sara :) congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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October 18, 2016 at 10:17 AM
Sarah, a 7 for sure! There's something very strong in these lines that speaks to my heart! Congrats on your well-deserved win! Janice
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