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Sometimes


Sometimes you lose things bit by bit 
sometimes, you need to sit with your sorrow 
for a little awhile 
In times like these, 
silence never goes out of style 

Sometimes the living scars 
are inside the darkest of shadows 
even dreams 
can not soothe 
the reality of yesterday's wounds 

Sometimes you need to just be and let it be 
a reminder that we are all like 
dust to the wind, 
one day we will all rescind. 

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Date: 7/25/2024 12:54:00 AM
Hi Rose, very touching and heartfelt. Silence, I call me time. These words, even dreams cannot soothe the reality of yesterday’s wounds, went straight into my heart. I keep reminding myself, Time heals and the heart will adjust. Stay Blessed my friend.
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Date: 7/24/2024 10:00:00 AM
Nice poem. Touching and thoughtful.
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Date: 7/24/2024 1:51:00 AM
very touching poem, silence can be the best writer, may sufferings, vanish very soon, thanks Rose for the deep poetry
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 7/24/2024 2:29:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comment dear Yann :)
Date: 7/24/2024 1:26:00 AM
"Sometimes the living scars are inside the darkest of shadows even dreams can not soothe the reality of yesterday's wounds " -- "Do not eat thine own heart"-- We take things too seriously, as you say; in the end (really an ever present beginning), we go back to the Father -- where flawless existence, one of complete abiding love re-emerges fresh. A new blossom coming forth, totally conscious of one's oneness with God. Very inspiring write, Vie. Thank you.
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 7/24/2024 2:29:00 AM
Thank you for your introspective message of love and Faith Joe, :)
Date: 7/23/2024 6:57:00 PM
very true dear poet. 'silence never goes out of style'. reflective writing. cheers.
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Date: 7/24/2024 2:28:00 AM
Thanks for your visit dear Thriveni

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