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sometimes I would wonder about the scars he hid beneath his polished veneer the covert memories he never shared the hardships he never spoke of the unhealed wounds still raw the ones I hoped I had helped heal sometimes I wondered Submitted on January 4, 2018 for contest EARLY JAN 2019 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST Originally posted on October 11, 2018

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Date: 1/9/2019 9:07:00 AM
Nicely done, Line-- one of those poems that leaves me wishing to hear more! Congrats on your win.
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Date: 1/9/2019 10:45:00 AM
What I lovely compliment. Thank you, LJ.
Date: 1/6/2019 5:29:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Line!
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Date: 1/6/2019 7:03:00 PM
Thank you so much, John. Most appreciated.
Date: 1/6/2019 5:16:00 PM
Congratulations Line on your win!
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Date: 1/6/2019 7:03:00 PM
Thanks, Wren. Much appreciated.
Date: 1/6/2019 4:37:00 PM
I really like this one of yours . ONe I never caught before. Congrats in the win with Brian.
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Date: 1/6/2019 7:03:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit, Andrea. Most appreciated.
Date: 1/6/2019 4:06:00 PM
Revisiting this gem that moves me so to wish you kudos on your win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes, Line. ~ Gershon
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Date: 1/6/2019 7:04:00 PM
Thank you so much, Gershon. Most appreciated.
Date: 10/12/2018 3:46:00 PM
Oooh. This one moves me A LOT. Penetratingly penned, Line! ~ Gershon
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Date: 10/12/2018 8:37:00 PM
Thank you so much, Gershon. Your comment means a lot to me.
Date: 10/11/2018 6:28:00 PM
This poem is beautiful because it reflects on something we are often unaware of - the secrets we all hold, that no one else can ever know. I have a feeling you have helped heal some of them my friend, if not all.
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Date: 10/11/2018 6:31:00 PM
Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Caren.

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