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Without You ORIGINAL VERSION
All I ever do is dream about you
I dream of your eyes…
And the beauty inside them
I dream of your arms…
And the way they have held me
I dream of your love…
And then I start crying
Because alone in the night, I realize
Without you… am I even me?
Without You REWRITE
All I ever do is dream about you
I dream of your eyes…
As they dance with so much life
I dream of your arms…
How they’ve held me so tightly
I dream of your love…
Before the tears start to fall
Reminding me that without you…
I’ll forever be without my heart!
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September 29, 2021
Copyright © Regina Mcintosh | Year Posted 2021
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