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oh, how perfectly you drape swaths of moonlite on your shape now you've chosen its soft blue for this night of something ... new you've decided we're too single that we need fresh ways to mingle so, if you'll grant me the dative methinks we should get creative I'm hoping these night sweats'll find our limbs wound to a pretzel you and I, one limber body twisted close, and rather knotty could it be, we're going too far with this night of karma sutra? still, the shapes have just begun and we're having so much fun though I think our best positions come between, in the transitions for like ALL in life we savor ... it's the tasting ... not the flavor. ~ 2nd Place ~ in the "Trying Something New" Poetry Contest, Nina Parmenter, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 10/28/2018 5:51:00 PM
sure made me smile Greg, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/28/2018 6:10:00 PM
Making YOU smile is a very good sign, in poetic terms, and I am so glad you enjoyed this one, Jan! Blessings, Dear Poet! :-) <3
Date: 10/28/2018 2:26:00 AM
Congrats, Gregory, love it. regards, Viv
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/28/2018 6:09:00 PM
That's kind of you, Viv, many thanks and blessings to you, Buddy! :-)
Date: 10/27/2018 7:50:00 PM
Yah! That last stanza clamps it! Nicely done. Congratulations!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/28/2018 6:08:00 PM
Very kind of you, Brian, and I'm so pleased you liked my poem! Blessings! :-)
Date: 10/27/2018 6:34:00 PM
I really like this - especially the last stanza.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/28/2018 6:08:00 PM
Thank you very much, Sunlite - I so appreciate it! :-) <3
Date: 10/27/2018 12:05:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, Gregory. I thought it was precious how the kama sutra was replaced by the karma sutra.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/28/2018 6:08:00 PM
Thank you so much, Line - not sure many people caught that, (I am a nut for puns, sadly ... I lost a girlfriend that way once, lol - her parents though puns were a sign of stupidity!). Blessings, Friend! :-) <3
Date: 10/27/2018 11:24:00 AM
Back with congrats! xomo <3
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/28/2018 6:06:00 PM
Many thanks, Maureen ... don't know where that other came from ... in a "mood", I guess! <3
Date: 10/27/2018 8:25:00 AM
Ooh saucy rhyme! I love it :))) Good luck in the contest! xomo <3
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/28/2018 6:03:00 PM
Thank you so, my dear Mo! My good luck charm, my moody balm! Always sweet - always saucy, Me, gorilla ... you, my Fossey! ;-) <3

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