Something Haunts the Moon

Something haunts the moon's face I cannot fathom now
Something I should trace, but cannot put into place
A silence that quietly sleeps on that beautiful brow
A hint of sadness veiled by the brightness of her grace

Is it the little star, bright and following closely behind
Is it the memory of death, picture of a missing child
Something more is there, and to which my soul is blind
Something about the moon tonight ... a thought exiled

Like me on foreign shores, like my heart for God's heaven
Pining the journey to make it back again, to find
My origin without myth or emptiness of the airy leaven
Orbited by days and shriveling sun, I ever pine

To escape time's orbit that recycles me over the same
Mountains and valleys and salt threshing seas 
Again and again, and keep me cold in shivering flame
How much will I know, how far can I get on bended knees?

O moon, something here that does not meet the eye
Tonight, something you but cannot share, something sure
Of our life, beauty is a thin disguise for our permit to die
Exiled in mortal bodies, we long for something more.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Beck Avatar
September 26, 2010 at 6:23 AM
David,.....Another excellent combination of imagery and ideas,....... such as "Beauty is a thin disguise for our permit to die"....... I enjoyed it greatly,.........Syd
Locksley Avatar
September 23, 2010 at 11:42 AM
The light of the moon can be deceptive, David. It hides more than it reveals. Intriguing poem and very well written.
Devonshire Avatar
September 23, 2010 at 8:59 AM
Amazing writing, as I have come to expect from you, David. There is something mysterious about the moon. Perhaps that is why man has been gazing at it for millennia. Incredible use of imagery, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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