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SOMEONE WHO WILL TAKE ME AS ME Someone who will take me as me... Gone are the days that I set standards just to possibly disinter who is who Gone are the days that I dig into just the appearance of my eyes can see above failures crash my thoughts and my dreams; even sharp arrows pierce my heart but above all these... I thank my Father God that I never stop hoping I never stop moving I never stop loving though there are times I asked Him why I assess my whole being of where did I fail... Have I love so less? Have I show so less? Have I said so less? Adieu to pride and greed, this I did as they roam like mist disturbing man yet, when love ramps and brace, it blocks fears and threats caused by problems and storms Disease and doubt cripple the self but if genuine love germs, healing flowers then it permeates Unmindful of who you are (past and present...) and where you from... Selfless to nail a heart full of affection with roots clinging within the core of the soul old age predisposes the skin to sag it causes the hair to gray and brittle it cause the body to deteriorate but what remains true... a love that wells to dwell though there is the invented word: DEATH. L O V E in its essence is bold and courageous to pursue Its lustrous flames wag fearless unchangeable unshakable and unfailing... Yes oh Yes tears convulse the mind and may even stroke the memories; Disagreements too, awake and arrest yet, none of them can corrode true love granting that the individuals involve chose to mend, restore and start anew. Willingness. Compromise. Acceptance. Understanding. Dedication. Honesty. Loyalty.Trust. Commitment. (You can add more.... but ask yourself, are you exercising them?) _____________________________________________ Oh! Father God... I implore thee Take me to Your loving arms You alone accept me for who I am You see beyond my even and my odds You know the rhythmn of my heart You read the running neurons in my head I abide in thee Reveal unto me Your Gracious will I admit~ apart from You I am nothing. All I have, it came from You. Always. More than ever I am seeking Your Holy presence. I surrender. And wherever I go Oh Father God, allow me to be a blessing for more of You and less of me is much better than this whole world Amen. __________________________________ Someone who will take me as me This I so long and been praying Oh Father God........ ___________________________________ O.E.Guillermo 5:55 pm April 12, 2014

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Date: 4/13/2015 1:48:00 PM
Powerful emotional feelings threaded like seams of life throughout this poetry Oliz. The title is wonderful, I'll take you little one, always, warm tight hugs//Dino James xxx
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Date: 4/15/2015 7:46:00 PM
Huge James, it is James.. thank you so much for seeing this humble poem as wonderful and powerful.. :)!!! ((hugs))xx//olive eloisa ;)!
Date: 4/13/2015 9:01:00 AM
such an amazing work :) loved happy to be back here after one year, invited u to read my PYRAMID. bless u
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Date: 4/15/2015 9:07:00 AM
thank you so much God bless.. :)!
Date: 4/13/2015 5:30:00 AM
There's nothing left to say...you've said it all in this poem. An honest and open write.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/15/2015 9:05:00 AM
thanks much m.l.. :)! God bless.. :)!
Date: 4/12/2015 1:34:00 PM
i seem to understand what this is about, eloi... you have covered a wide range of feelings so well crafted... ang galing!.. thanks for choosing my entry for your latest contest.. huggs
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/14/2015 9:40:00 AM
thank you so much for your kind support Nette.. :)! hugs much~olive eloisa
Date: 4/12/2015 9:38:00 AM
Olive, your poem is full of wonderful words, lines and emotions, beautifully penned, 7, and I want to thank you for my fine placement in your Blossoms and Bubbles contest, I am so honoured
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/14/2015 9:09:00 AM
Thank you Broken Wings.. :) I am humbled by your visits.. ;)~OLIVE EOISA
Date: 4/12/2015 5:33:00 AM
What a beautiful, profound poem. Impressive Olive.
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Date: 4/13/2015 11:26:00 AM
thank you so much Rob.. :) I appreciate your drop by.. :)~olive eloisa :)!

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