Someday, Sometime, Somewhere

Out there is a stranger that I already...............love
no, you don't know me now, but you.................will
just keep looking and eventually we will..........find
a winding road that ends with you and..............me
before these short years find their end....someday
that rarest moment will surely happen...sometime
with us finally meeting face to face.....somewhere.







"End Line Word" contest
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Gasun Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 11:27 PM
This is so sweet and so beautiful my dear friend, Kelly! An amazing poet you are. I'll add you in my fave list. I Love this so much and belated warm Congrats on this excellent piece and win! Thank you so much for sharing! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
Deschler Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 9:56 PM
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment so kindly on my poem. I appreciate that very much, Leonora... Hugs :)
Makama Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 11:30 AM
#7 truly underrates this magnificent piece.. Absolutely brilliant
Deschler Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 1:29 PM
Thank you, Funom. I appreciate your comments and 7 rating :)
Inman Avatar
November 12, 2015 at 11:43 AM
Really liked this Kelly. Flows very smoothly and the positive playfulness is great.
Deschler Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 9:37 PM
I'm happy that you did, James. Thank you for your nice comments on this poem :)
A  Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 12:22 PM
Kelly, Congratulations on your End Line Win. LOVE SKAT
Kendrick Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 11:39 AM
End line winner so great!!Deserves a big congrats..Sara
Deschler Avatar
November 17, 2015 at 11:08 PM
I really appreciate that, Sara. Thank you for your kindness :)
A. Sharma Avatar
November 4, 2015 at 11:27 PM
Congrats on fine win Kelly with this superb write!
Deschler Avatar
November 16, 2015 at 1:09 AM
I do appreciate your kind congrats and comments. Thank you, Dr. Upma!
Ebbs Avatar
November 4, 2015 at 2:53 PM
So sweet Kelly, I know just enough to know there is someone very special at there that will find you!! Congrats on your placement :)
Deschler Avatar
November 14, 2015 at 6:53 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words, Edward. I do think that love will find me one day, probably when I least expect it! :)
Callus Avatar
November 4, 2015 at 12:37 PM
Back with congratulations, Kelly! Hope that love has been to pay you a visit:) ~ Warm regards // paul
Deschler Avatar
November 14, 2015 at 6:39 PM
Thank you, Paul. I appreciate your kind words :) ... Love has not found me yet, though I feel it getting closer and closer every day!
Richards Avatar
October 4, 2015 at 5:14 PM
I do love you end line message,,,,..... and I hope such a wonderful wish will come true for you, Kelly! (I'm sure he will be the lucky one!) Great job.!! Ps.......thanks so much, it was an honor that you enjoyed my version of being a pirate for the day!!! LOL !! Thanks for the inspiration and challenge!
Deschler Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 2:29 PM
You're very welcome. Its nice to hear that you enjoyed my pirate contest, Carrie. Thank you for taking part in it... I really do appreciate your kind words about this poem :)
Vaso Avatar
September 12, 2015 at 11:52 PM
I really liked how you did this!
Deschler Avatar
September 19, 2015 at 2:03 PM
I appreciate each of your kind comments, Arthur. Thank you for taking the time to read my poems... This was an interesting new form to write in. I never tried it before, so it was fun to do something a bit different.
Bordner Avatar
September 12, 2015 at 3:12 PM
Destiny is very beautiful when revealed from such determined lips Kelly. Your love is strong, and romantically prophetic. This is brilliantly crafted, like your heart...J.A.B.
Deschler Avatar
September 18, 2015 at 9:34 PM
I always appreciate your kind words, Justin. Thank you :) ...A destiny shared with another is something worth searching forever for. I am determined to find whoever that may be, and I know I will one day...
Labeau Avatar
September 10, 2015 at 12:44 PM
great ready to meet you
Deschler Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 11:32 PM
Thank you for reading, Catherine :)
Austin Avatar
September 5, 2015 at 9:50 AM
This is a marvelous twist, Kelly. Who on earth has not dreamed of such a romantic happening. Love, daver
Deschler Avatar
September 12, 2015 at 1:52 PM
Everyone searches for love, but it is sad that many never find it. I have faith that love will find me one day... Thank you for your nice comments, as always, Daver :)
Nasir Avatar
September 5, 2015 at 4:10 AM
ITS title just took me ... yea someday somewhere some day that time would surely come ... :)
Deschler Avatar
September 12, 2015 at 1:37 PM
I do believe in my heart that, that time will come, Hina... Thank you for reading and commenting so kindly. It is nice to see you here again :)
Andresen Avatar
September 3, 2015 at 11:51 AM
- Beautifully penned, dear Kelly - You find love in your heart ..... the one you want to share it with ..... you will find someday, sometime, somewhere !!! - hugs and a 7 // Anne-Lise :)
Deschler Avatar
September 10, 2015 at 7:05 PM
I truly hope so, Anne-Lise. I've been searching for a long time... Love will find me someday, I just know it :) Thank you so much for reading :)
Boddie Avatar
September 3, 2015 at 11:32 AM
if destiny leads us together....submission will work better....because when you give in to Love....you will always have Blessings From Above....;)
Deschler Avatar
September 10, 2015 at 6:55 PM
That's true, though giving in to love is not always so easy to do... Thank you for reading, Eric. I really appreciate it :)
Callus Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 4:34 PM
Lovely poem that shows faith in love and the future. Like the romantic feel of the end line, Kelly. gl in the contest. #7 // paul
Deschler Avatar
September 10, 2015 at 2:12 PM
I do have faith that love will find me, and hopefully, it will be sooner rather than later... Thank you for your nice comments, as always, Paul :)
Muideen Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 3:22 PM
A lovely and a beautiful write friend..... It's so much intriguing.........A.M.
Deschler Avatar
September 10, 2015 at 1:58 PM
Thank you for reading, Afolabi. I appreciate your kind words :)
Dietrich Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 12:52 AM
I love this kind of end line poem you did, so romantic!! I love romance poetry!(and deep yearning!)
Deschler Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 8:38 PM
Thank you so much for your nice comments, Andrea. I've never written in this form before, but decided to give it a try... I also don't write romantically very often, so it was nice to do something a bit different :)
Kendrick Avatar
September 1, 2015 at 9:10 AM
Reads like a winner to me..Way to go ..Very good end line..Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara
Deschler Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 8:03 PM
Thank you so much, Sara :)
Horn Avatar
September 1, 2015 at 4:12 AM
Kelly, Glad you liked my Normandy pictures regarding your uncle who was killed in the area. Here is a poem that I also wrote about hummingbirds. Jim Horn http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/hath_a_humming_bird_704464
Deschler Avatar
September 8, 2015 at 11:50 PM
Thank you for reading, Jim. I appreciate your comments :)
Onclaud Avatar
August 31, 2015 at 2:48 PM
how this flows is amazing... i like the sweet mystery of your write, kelly!.. charmed.. huggs
Deschler Avatar
September 8, 2015 at 12:07 AM
Thank you so much for reading, Nette... These lines came straight from my heart and they just flowed out so easily :)
Sathasivam Avatar
August 31, 2015 at 4:13 AM
Excellent. Beautifully penned. Enjoyed. Tfs
Deschler Avatar
September 7, 2015 at 11:44 PM
Thank you for reading, Ravi :)
Allison Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 6:24 PM
Oh Kelly I hope this does happen for you one day - wonderful end line poem good luck in the contest - this is my fave of the ones I've read so far:-) hugs Jan xx 7
Deschler Avatar
September 5, 2015 at 11:08 PM
I sure hope so, Jan. It would be nice to love and be loved by someone else... Thank you very much for your encouragment and support, Jan... Hugs :)
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