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we had dreams we talked about we had dreams we tossed about thought we had all the time in the world we were wrong o so wrong we found out the hard way that someday is not a day in the week someday is the abandoned warehouse where dreams go when they die someday is the dead zone where dreams break down and cry someday is the void in the sky where the moon used to rise someday is the silence that followed when you died Submitted on April 21, 2021 for contest WRITING PROMPT - ACHE sponsored by CONSTANCE LA FRANCE - RANKED 2ND

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Date: 4/28/2021 8:30:00 AM
Line, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt -Ache- Challenge with your wonderful Free Verse poem, very sad and emotional, well done, love _Constance
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/28/2021 10:35:00 AM
Thank you for hosting this contest and for my placement, Constance. Most appreciated ~
Date: 4/23/2021 12:04:00 PM
Hello Line yes this is so true. Hugs Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/24/2021 10:15:00 AM
Hello Line, you are welcome . Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/23/2021 9:05:00 PM
Thanks, Darlene ~
Date: 4/22/2021 5:36:00 PM
Superb realization of the prompt, Line. A hard truth you've presented, albeit a touching truth. Super entry, Gershon
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/22/2021 8:33:00 PM
Thank you very much, Gershon ~ Much appreciated
Date: 4/22/2021 8:14:00 AM
Emotive poem. Creative way to describe the ache.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/22/2021 8:33:00 PM
Thank you very much, Juliet ~
Date: 4/21/2021 7:51:00 PM
This is so sad, Line! But there is a wise message in your words. Blessings, Kim M
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/21/2021 9:55:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Kim ~

Book: Shattered Sighs