Someday

tadpoles growing in a pond anxious for the great beyond decreased numbers, fairly grim takes too long to grow a limb hiding from the larger fish trying not to be a dish feeding on the larval flies protein bars in strange disguise gain a voice before you croak caught up in a ghastly joke wishing you could wave a wand hop out of this brackish pond finally you climb a log live your days out as a frog in the water for a rinse back on lookout for your prince
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Wolf Avatar
May 7, 2022 at 8:27 PM
'protein bars in strange disguise' - Classic line there, Jeff. Cheers, Gershon
Dietrich Avatar
May 7, 2022 at 8:15 PM
oh I just love this, jeff, so cute and whimsical and also profound at the same time. FAVE
Kyser Avatar
May 7, 2022 at 8:19 PM
Thanks, Andrea!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 7, 2022 at 12:38 PM
Fun! Fun! Fun! You’re an excellent poet!
Kyser Avatar
May 7, 2022 at 1:55 PM
grandkids make you think strange things! and if you ever feel you need a shot of creativity, read the mary poppins series! wild stories, for sure! Thanks, Kim!
Hankins Avatar
May 7, 2022 at 11:59 AM
Clever, indeed. Jeff you have done a terrific job with this. I never would have thought to put myself into the persona of a tadpole!
Hankins Avatar
May 7, 2022 at 2:01 PM
Well, if you get a visit from a blue heron, they won't last long!
Kyser Avatar
May 7, 2022 at 12:16 PM
We've got a collection pond out back, and I noticed it was full of tadpoles yesterday. Got me thinking... :-) Thanks!
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May 7, 2022 at 9:26 AM
The metamorphosis of a frog, as seen with a poetic fairytale spin, a great one for the classroom recital, cheers David
Kyser Avatar
May 7, 2022 at 10:18 AM
Thanks, David, glad you enjoyed it!
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