Some Nice Old Man

Walk of shame 
Parades past my house everyday
Ebony girl 
Laptop pinned under her arm
Walking with purpose
White halter, black shorts
And flip flops
Pass her on my way to store
She's a lot further on my way back
Going to get what I forgot
She's made tracks
Girl can walk
Eyes locked to the ground
Where's the fire
She's scared 
I turn around 
Stop across the road from her
Roll down my window
"Can I give you a ride?"
She gets in. I listen
21, and well, 21
First night in jail
I get her big cold bottle of water 
Along with what I forgot
Take her home 
She calls friend to come get her
"I don't know... some nice old man" she says
An hour later car stops out front
She turns smiles pretty pearls and waves goodbye
Some nice old man 
Smiles back, tips his hat
Asks himself why
As he walks inside
Not Karma
(Though he could use some)
Nor Jesus points
(He doesn't believe)
Just do what you should
Feels good
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Kendrick Avatar
July 17, 2022 at 7:20 AM
Well, it is good that the nice old man helped and did no harm. Today it is so dangerous out there. I enjoyed reading your work. Sara
Young Avatar
July 17, 2022 at 3:25 PM
Thanks for comment. You are right about how dangerous it is for vulnerable people. I was a teacher until I retired and can't count many times I reported stuff to child protective services.
Rose  Avatar
July 16, 2022 at 2:42 PM
wish there were more people who took a chance and helped others the way you do. Enjoyed the poem , thank you
Young Avatar
July 17, 2022 at 3:34 PM
Thanks. She's not first or last and I have been burned too. Let a person who needed place to stay watch my place while I was gone for a month and came home to trashed house. But thats ok. Not everyone can be helped
Pandit Avatar
July 16, 2022 at 10:52 AM
There is a message of goodwill in this poem. Enjoyed reading about it.
Young Avatar
July 16, 2022 at 5:12 PM
Thanks. Goodwill is spot on. Implies some faith in humanity. Not always easy to find.
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