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SOME CRUMBS OF LOVE Five feet one inch tall that I am Young adult I am at twenty-nine this year Wearing a contagious smile that outshines the sun they say Constantly been walking and walking on weeds and rocks where only I have are my dreams and the love I experienced... Hundreds of faces challenge my phase, my grace Ah! so many times, I fall, crumbling down to my knees, hugging my pillow to release some rolling tears for fears so many times, I keep quiet for rumbling roars of criticisms where they... they pierced sharp my peace and my heart, I tried to utter my stand... hoping they may understand-- but no! No! No! All they said is I'll land nowhere... Mistakes. Failures. Wrong decisions. Yes, they all smeared my individuality, they painted blues and grays to my personality, but hey! hey! Haven't we all experience such? I thank God I didn't commit murder nor steal dignity. I thank God to Him I confess. I admit. And more, I didn't give up instead I am trying. I am changing. I refused to remain stagnant despite you pulling me down. Weaknesses I have but I didn't let them kick me nor smash me. I have a BIG, BIG GOD who watches over me never ever letting me go, always faithful, loving and unchanging... To the times you verbally abused me, He showered me with people who tell me otherwise. Don't you know it pains me that we are like this, I came home having you in mind to get closer with, though eversince, eversince, I always strive to please you, I long for you to atleast ask how I am doing I long for you to notice me-- not only when I do mistakes but also to boost me I long for you to hold and hug me and tell me: "it's going to be alright" but then again, all I heard from you is the constant replay of my mistakes. Didn't you see I effort twice, thrice to redeem myself? I thank God He balances things for me. I thank God He is restoring me. I love you despite what you are doing to me, I owe my life to you--- for you carried me nine months, we shared the same blood, same oxygen, same food then... I am fervently praying that please, please Mama, see me more. Kindly please see me more... Please see how I have become over all those failures I have, if there have been disobedience, I am so sorry The past, can we forget and let go of them? I so want to start anew. And please, please Mama, spare me... Spare me crumbs of your respect, faith and love... __________________________________________________________________ *** sad Moods - Poetry Contest Sponsor Name - Silent One ~2nd place~ Olive Eloisa Guillermo 6:23 pm, 11, 2015

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/2/2015 11:06:00 PM

What a beauty u hv penned here Olive! Congrats on big win!

Tim Smith

Date: 8/2/2015 4:20:00 PM

What a beautiful write Olive...congratulations

Skat A

Date: 8/2/2015 4:13:00 PM

Olive, Congrats. SK

Kp Nunez

Date: 8/2/2015 2:00:00 PM

Back to congratulate you, Olive. Hope things have changed for the better. hugs

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/2/2015 9:13:00 AM

Olive, this poignant write moved me to tears. In the midst of all your saddeness your heavenly father was there. Great poem! Congrats on a well deserved win:-) Alexis

Jan Allison

Date: 8/2/2015 7:51:00 AM

I can relate to parts of this poem but with my father - I found it very painful to read:-( congrats on your win :-) hugs Jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/5/2015 9:27:00 AM

Jan, sad to know... however it maybe that we have these moments... we let them go and just settle to the wonderful moments we shared unto them... hugs back!

Funom Makama

Date: 5/28/2015 10:34:00 AM

Great lines with majestic eloquence.. Your meandering of words still did not prevent your peice from giving out its message. This is an absolute 7!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/3/2015 9:47:00 AM

thank you so much Funom.. your comment is much appreciated..

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/13/2015 3:05:00 AM

- Good morning to Philippines from Norway :) - Religion should build people and sharpen our humanity, making us more empathetic and make life beautiful around us - I wish you enough sun to that your life becomes bright - I wish you enough rain to you appreciate the sun - A deep and heartbreaking beautiful poem dear friend Olive - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/19/2015 4:31:00 AM

Anne Lise, my friend thank you so much for your warm comments.. thank you for your wishes..:)! hugs and hugs///olive eloisa

James Fraser

Date: 5/12/2015 1:52:00 PM

Heartfelt words like seams of life, loving, challenging, even strife. Emotional rescue is how I see you here Olive, to be rescued from moments of sadness, bullying, and deliberate berating of a loved one. This is something I haven't had to endure, but I can only hope and pray that such no longer continues. For me, my mother left my life aged 6. The warmest of huggles winging their way to you Oliz // Dino James xxxx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/12/2015 11:06:00 PM

James I always pray that such may not happen... though it seems still goes no matter how i refuse to be on such.. there are times That I really opted leaving though it pains me as I Love her anyhow. its just too hurtful that i must go..i think we all became a sponge once where we try to absorb as much as we can til we can't then there water seeps...I believe the Spirit will kove eithin~ olive eloisa

Kp Nunez

Date: 5/11/2015 6:01:00 AM

Such a heartrending and sincere appeal from a daughter's fragile heart, dear Olive. My heart and prayer goes out to you. It takes herculean courage to plaster your emotions onto this page. May your prayer be answered and may your plea be heard. T A 7. Hugs!!! Kim

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/11/2015 8:15:00 AM

This my heartful dedication to my mama...I love her still despite everything...