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Must use the following words,

1.Crystal 2.Gloaming 3.Frosted 4. Forevermore 5. Pathos 6. Valiant 7. Melancholy  8. Unpredictable

 

On the cusp of the gloaming, frigid air turns crystal clear. And the frosted window panes assume an icy veneer. The season slowly shifted as warmer days slipped away. And Sol's brilliance sets early, no longer fueled by day. A sad, melancholy moon rose to mourn a dying sun. And with feelings of pathos, questioned what the night had done. Wild and unpredictable, brisk breezes began to bite. And yet, winter seems content to watch the stars, shining bright. (Quatrain) 8/17/2017

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Date: 5/26/2018 8:47:00 PM
Well penned, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/27/2018 7:40:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/17/2017 3:56:00 PM
Very nice poem Emile. You used the required words effortlessly. So smooth. Good luck with the contest. -- Dean
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Date: 8/17/2017 5:37:00 PM
Thanks Dean, your comments have brought a smile to my face my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/17/2017 1:08:00 PM
Beautiful rhythm and flow--good luck for the contest, Emile!
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Date: 8/17/2017 1:59:00 PM
Thanks Vijay, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/17/2017 12:54:00 PM
Nice work Emile :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/17/2017 1:58:00 PM
Thanks Maureen, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/17/2017 10:52:00 AM
I like how the poem leads the reader through so much and then ends with the twinkling stars :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/17/2017 12:03:00 PM
Thanks Heidi, I always enjoy your comments my friend, Emile.

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