Solitude

Lone, I sit at rivers edge complete a song through the trees mingle love saturate calm the flow content as I seek a solitude of grandeur floats fulfilled inviting spring a song through the trees mingle love saturate compassion abound my soul permeate a solitude of grandeur floats fulfilled inviting spring I drift in completion of spirit loving way compassion abound my soul permeate calm the flow content as I seek I drift in completion of spirit loving way lone, I sit at rivers edge complete Contest

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/12/2010 7:57:00 PM

very nice atmosphere to this one. It kind of reminded me of the one Constance did in that way. Congrats in the panoum contest, RIck. LUv, Andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/9/2010 8:48:00 AM

Congratulations ^Rick on your win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "Pantoum Me". Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/8/2010 6:18:00 PM

Congrats on the sixth place win in my contest, Rick

Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/8/2010 1:51:00 PM

Congratulations o yur win. Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/8/2010 7:27:00 AM

Congrats Rick on your winning poem in the Pantoum Me contest with this amazing and entertaining write.. enjoy another super win this happy Sunday with blessings..my friend..with luv..

Lynette Chachere

Date: 8/1/2010 12:46:00 AM

to find completion in yourself, is one of the best things one person has for themselves. a truly great poem. ~Always&Forever Lynette

Charles Henderson

Date: 7/31/2010 9:48:00 PM

Nice pantoum Rick. I can understand how you won with this nice one. Charles

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/31/2010 9:28:00 PM

Lovely Pantoum.. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/31/2010 5:43:00 PM

Thanks , Rick, for supporting my contest

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/31/2010 9:30:00 AM

Hi, Rick. I've been on a two-week vacation and return late Monday. Visiting family and friends in the Northeast. There is a wonderful sense of serenity in the beautiful pantuoum. I hope to catch up with Soup people after my vacation ends. Miss you! Love, Carolyn