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Solitude

Stillness in the mind comes from a breath, deep Filtering through my spirit like a friend Alone in evening's walk, I watch night sweep Across the dark sea, that has no end To see the emptiness of a long beach And sink in its plastered sand with tired feet Then seek a solitude my mind can reach And befriend time for relaxed state I'll greet Before night completes its crawl so silent I'll feel the rhythm of a gentle wave And release my soul, to be compliant And let it soar from this vessel, this cave I'll find the freedom of a spirit in flight And enjoy silence from the coming night contest Solitude 8/7/14

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/24/2015 9:46:00 AM
From reading some of your poems, You truly are an Excellent Poet Frederic!
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Date: 11/9/2014 5:07:00 PM
The ocean always makes me feel that ways too..Congrats my friend..BG
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Date: 11/9/2014 4:39:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats on your honourable mention:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/23/2014 9:24:00 PM
Dear Frederic: Lovely write. Lovely read. This solitude of the heart and soul is very healing. Well done. Enjoyed this poem. All the best then, Leon
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Date: 8/7/2014 6:07:00 PM
wonderful flow and imagery Frederic - i feel very at peace reading this lovely sonnet:-) Good luck in the contest. Hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/7/2014 2:25:00 PM
Solitude is what wakes the soul up. We need moments of solitude to think, to revamp, and to reflect. Your poem is sending me to great height, my friend Frederic. Sounds like you know it :)
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Date: 8/7/2014 11:36:00 AM
This has great flow and feeling Frederic...nicely written
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