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What a beautiful morning it is. The sun welcomes us once again, ~¬ her heat amazes our lives. White clouds in the distance ~ will appease the warmth. Gorgeous she is, bringing life to us all. Hey! look mom, the skies changing colour. Gone are the blues, streaks of white light ~¬ are now racing each others trace. Wow, I'm seeing distant ~ horizons on fire. I'm so scared mom, we're going to die ______ We are somewhere in New York State Having just landed amidst hush ~¬ Vapour trailing skies abound. Overgrown lands thrive, whilst ~ little movement seems apparently at a loss. Where oh where? http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/space-3.php

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Date: 10/6/2010 9:21:00 AM
Yes, this one should be made into a movie... nicely done again!
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Date: 10/5/2010 7:22:00 AM
Ultamodern feel to this one James.. I love the images portrayed.. Visually stimulating.. Hope your Tuesday's going great ~~ Wilma
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Date: 10/3/2010 7:13:00 AM
Great wild imagination at work again..Sara
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Date: 10/2/2010 9:52:00 PM
Another great "futuristic" write, James..Enjoyed this vision with the great imagery and flow...Your works are always very interesting! Peace, love, Audrey
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Date: 10/2/2010 6:17:00 PM
enjoyed reading today...
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