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Sohni Mahiwal

Sohni Mahiwal - Love epic Love has ever retained its glow, for years and centuries have passed, True to its eternal constant flow, in history, etched and cast. When Sohni swam across, in no boat, as every evening craved her bare soul, Held an earthen pot that kept her afloat, as sun slowly slid to the other pole, Soul mate Mahiwal waited at the bank, as she emerged from water serene, The world tagged them as crank, an ocean as if walked to the supreme, Lost in absolute zero, the two daily met, till the envied dears played a foul game, The trust woke up to a life's regret, the punctured pot, waters were in flame, Waves engulfed to set them free, united by death, they rode the tides, Heavenly abode beyond the skies, Alive in hymns as their souls sing out ! Written July 30th, 2015 For contest "Epic only" by SKAT A On tragic love story of Sohni and Mahiwal

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Date: 8/3/2015 3:57:00 AM
What a beautiful write, I love it congratulations............A.M.
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 8/4/2015 11:05:00 PM
Thnx afolabi!
Date: 8/3/2015 3:06:00 AM
This is a truly compelling tragic love story, Upma! Sohni and Mahiwal were forever united through death. ~ Congratulations on your win! // paul
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 8/4/2015 11:05:00 PM
Thnx Paul! Its based on a true love story!
Date: 8/2/2015 11:55:00 PM
Dr Upma, Congratulations, on your win. Thank you for supporting my contest. SKAT
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 8/3/2015 12:05:00 AM
Thanks dear Skat! Glad u liked this n placed in ur contest!
Date: 7/30/2015 8:53:00 PM
Beautiful story Dr Upma...best wishes...
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 8/4/2015 11:06:00 PM
Thnx Joseph, ur wishes paid!

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