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Soft Yellow

Soft yellow illuminates gray clouds
Like a conch shell weathered
'Pon a cold cloudy winter beach
Sitting alone tethered  

Haven't decided if to go on or not
Maybe finis' or maybe not

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Jack Horne

February 2, 2014 at 10:17 AM

lol, had a chuckle at this witty write

Cherl Dunn

January 30, 2014 at 9:11 PM

It has gentle softness to it love your sweet write. cheri

Donna Jones

January 30, 2014 at 6:21 PM

Love it as is Sara....very beautiful....

Isaiah Zerbst

January 30, 2014 at 10:25 AM

Well, you have a wonderful simile here, you could apply it to some aspect of life effectively if you are so inspired. Even the title was an excellent choice and very compelling.

Barbara Gorelick

January 30, 2014 at 10:10 AM

The title is great...I would leave it, but then, Im a fan of short forms. BG

Andrea Dietrich

January 29, 2014 at 10:41 PM

I like the mood this evokes and I think it is fine as it is. Unless you had more to say about the day!

Russell Sivey

January 29, 2014 at 10:32 PM

I would only go on if you feel tugged to do so! This write is complete as is...at least to me I feel closure at the end, but I could see it continuing on if you feel like it should go on! But that is up to you, not me! I really loved reading this tremendous poem here this evening! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!