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The willows whisper
clouds gaze above
On forgotten fields
that once grew love
Eye's sparkle gone
dust in its place
A fading flower
hope's tear-stained face
The day is ending
Hues' kiss goodnight 
Soft shadows cruel tease
That everything's all right

~Lyric Man

Note: This is an echo poem from one of my favorite poets on the Soup. I heard she has now gone and I had the beauty and the melancholy colliding inside.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Date: 9/23/2018 3:00:00 AM
Truly beautiful...
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Date: 7/16/2018 6:43:00 PM
A fave..
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Date: 7/16/2018 6:42:00 PM
I hope She won't stray for long...Hope She returns to those forgotten fields...and recall their remembarance.Such a sad a beautiful poem..David.
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Date: 7/12/2018 6:10:00 PM
Very Nice!
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Date: 7/8/2018 7:37:00 AM
It's easy to believe with willows whispering and clouds gazing and shadows softening that everything is all right.
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Date: 6/16/2018 5:21:00 PM
:( this made me sad because we do have some close bonds with fellow poets and when one leaves this place we can still feel their whispers in the wind
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Date: 6/8/2018 12:20:00 PM
Dust in place of eye's sparkle, now tears in mine. every things not right when loose some one. That's what I felt from this. Quietly intense. Thanks for visiting me. OH! Educate me...what is a echo poem>
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Date: 6/12/2018 10:39:00 PM
An echo poem is a direct response to another writer's poem. It's almost like singing a duet!
Date: 5/15/2018 9:59:00 AM
This is a very lovely piece with awesome imagery! Love it! Hugs. Pandita
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Date: 5/14/2018 7:29:00 AM
Well written...on forgotten fields that once grew love. The reader can feel this :)
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Date: 5/14/2018 6:01:00 AM
"A fading flower...hope's tear-stained face" Those are my favorite lines, Chance. Sorrowfully emotional.
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