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Soft Rain Drops

Soft raindrops fall like dew drops upon the grass As I walk wearily down my street with this heavy load alone No, it’s not a nature walk, but a walk to clear my head Because he’s not free to take a walk, I walk for him and me In hope, the rain will wash away the pain for him, I feel Suffering shared, so easily conveyed, by the tears I shed But soft rain walks with me out here And gently kisses my face Camouflaging my flowing tears Yet, as I come 'round the bend to my front door, My leaden spirit slowly rising I see my rose bush thriving with Remarkable abundance of buds! Soft raindrops fall, like dew upon the grass Gently kissing each bud in view I smile and I realize that like the beautiful rose Out of this pain we will grow For God sends soft raindrops to ease growing pain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/20/2010 8:55:00 AM
this is a really niice poem, i especially like the last line!!..thanks for taking the time to read and comment on my writing!
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Date: 4/14/2010 10:32:00 AM
A very sweet write. Rain always helps my pain, nice one .
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Date: 4/14/2010 8:40:00 AM
An idyllic write Audrey,your poem evokes a 'soft' amosphere.Rgds Brian & thank you for your welcome comments.
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Date: 4/14/2010 5:38:00 AM
Out of this pain we will grow and yes it will be so Audrey BBF and keep looking toward the positive future ... such a lovely creative write from your gifted pen.. thankxxx for your many compliments on my poetry and the best to u and JAM ..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/13/2010 8:00:00 PM
Love it!
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Date: 4/13/2010 4:14:00 PM
sweet thoughts on this poem. Enjoyed.
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