Soft Petals

soft petals open quietly in the dark night Russell Sivey

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/28/2012 12:31:00 AM

and I believe I heard of a flower that opened its petals at night.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/28/2012 12:30:00 AM

Very lovely, russell.

Robert Pettit

Date: 4/2/2012 10:21:00 PM

Nicely written haiku, Russell. However, which flowers open their petals at night? To me, that would be like a bird flying north for the winter.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/2/2012 6:00:00 AM

What a way to start a new week seeing all the comments made over the weekend to my poetry. Thank you ever so much for your kind words on my poetry Russell. It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/1/2012 10:56:00 AM

oh my, russell.. this is a beauty of a 'ku... i can feel the mood of soft and dark; so It's rich in form, in creativity, and in imagery. well done, dear friend!.. how's school?.. :) huggs and winning wishes if for a contest..

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 4/1/2012 10:46:00 AM

I wish my plant would open it's dang petals. I like the AC repair men sprayed freon on my lovelies! :( I knew you would LOVE the Granny panty tranny poem! Well, I have written my last poem on the soup....please see me off kindly by reading the farewell Haiku! Thanks Russ!

Jack Horne

Date: 4/1/2012 9:36:00 AM

sweet haiku, russell

Deb Wilson

Date: 4/1/2012 7:48:00 AM

lovely haiku Russell..love,Deb