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Soft Lullaby

A soft lullaby drifts by a cloud in the sky smiles 'Hi' Palm Trees Sway in Coconut Bay Words we pray deep roots for the day Toward evening a shower sunset in an hour Gentle lullabies sweet rainbows and sighs

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Date: 7/1/2021 10:41:00 PM
Hello Gershon … this verse is certainly a fine lullaby with what is good in life - thanks Gershon - Lindsay
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Date: 7/1/2021 9:52:00 PM
Hi Gershon. I love this poem and the way it sounded when I read it out loud. Is there anything written sweeter than a lullaby? This would make a cute little board book for a child. My favorite line is, Palm Trees Sway in Coconut Bay. Sounds dreamy, I want to go:) Marikate
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Date: 6/30/2021 11:35:00 PM
This is a beautiful lullaby Gershon.
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Date: 6/30/2021 2:05:00 PM
A lovely lullaby Gershon, love the idea of a cloud smiles ‘Hi’… Belle
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/30/2021 8:27:00 PM
Clouds smile for a while; Sun rises; the Day surprises... :) gw
Date: 6/30/2021 1:57:00 AM
This is so gentle and restful. I can almost see a hammock between two palm trees and just being rocked in peace to the sound of the waves.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/30/2021 8:23:00 PM
Time to string that hammock up and get some serious rest! ~ Lemonade Louie
Date: 6/30/2021 1:05:00 AM
i love it,we all like to look at clouds drifting alone,always going somewhere,always changing,these little puffs of white and grey....can often make my day..good job,i love clouds....
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Date: 6/30/2021 8:21:00 PM
Clouds speak to our hearts... :) gw
Date: 6/29/2021 7:10:00 PM
My dear friend, Gershon, your Soft Lullaby is serene and supreme. Gorgeous imagery lulls me to linger in soothing beauty. So lovely. Warmest wishes and lullabies.. ~Susan
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/30/2021 8:20:00 PM
I just want you to know that after I aced Toilet Training School, I got a Masters in 'Sleeping Soundlessly' ~ Phantom of the Night
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Susan Ashley
Date: 6/29/2021 7:57:00 PM
haha! non-snorer.. yah, right! :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/29/2021 7:49:00 PM
Thank you for your alliterative -- serene, supreme, soothing -- praise. It lulls me to sleep, Susan. ~ Non-snorer
Date: 6/29/2021 3:44:00 PM
Absolutely smashing write, Gershon. I love ‘a cloud in the sky says ‘Hi’’ (except if that happened I’d hope it didn’t lower a ladder and say ‘come’) ;-) Terry
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Date: 6/29/2021 7:47:00 PM
I think you've got a ways to go there, Terry! Sure hope so! :) gw
Date: 6/29/2021 10:35:00 AM
Oh, this is so nice Gershon! Well written :)
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Date: 6/29/2021 7:47:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi! Happiness and Joy, Gershon
Date: 6/29/2021 9:45:00 AM
Beautiful.
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Date: 6/29/2021 7:46:00 PM
Love the succinct comment, Juliet. Peace, Gershon
Date: 6/29/2021 8:57:00 AM
Ah, such uplifting images, gw. Makes me want to go outside and look up at the clouds and do nothing for the rest of the day but day-dream. Ah.....
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/29/2021 7:45:00 PM
Well, why not?! Let's go fly a kite -- mentally, anyway. :) gw
Date: 6/29/2021 1:58:00 AM
Ah! Simply lovely, Gershon:)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/29/2021 7:38:00 PM
So glad you like this one, Jo. Thank you for visiting my site. Moonbeams and Stardust, Gershon

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