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New Faces Model | Woman face, Model face, Face photography

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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ soft light from the soul brings life to her passive face a smile wants to bloom

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 4/8/2024 8:26:00 PM
Our smiles lighten up the heavens, the earth and the people in it. Smile has been used so much we can't tell when it's sincere. However continue to light our world, her world.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/9/2024 4:54:00 AM
true, sometimes a challenge to discern the sincerity of a smile. Appreciate your visit and you sharing your thoughts, hugs, Sara
Date: 4/8/2024 3:27:00 AM
Hello, beautiful Sara, what a beautiful senryu you've crafted, conveying the deep essence of how inner glow actually makes our hearts shine.. That soft light of purity is evermore lustrous like the brightest star! Love your eloquent wordplay here. Really missed reading your beautiful poems and now truly excited to read once again :) sending love & light.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/8/2024 4:50:00 AM
I am so delighted to receive your comments. I've missed your kind and generous words as well as your poems. I appreciate your positive comments, especially regarding the word play. Wishing you a splendid day, hugs x2 Sara :-)
Date: 4/8/2024 12:04:00 AM
Very lovely pithy Senryu! Best time blooming. Have a wonderful blooming time :-)
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Date: 4/7/2024 12:09:00 PM
A lovely senryu. Soft light is so powerful in photography.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/7/2024 6:25:00 PM
thank you, dear Hilda. Appreciate your continued support...have a pleasant evening, Sara
Date: 4/7/2024 3:53:00 AM
Her eyes have the makings of a piercing gaze...lol. I fear those...glad its a smile bubbling under. Nice senryu
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/7/2024 6:25:00 PM
I can see what you're saying. I appreciate your visit and your comments. Enjoy your evening, Sara
Date: 4/7/2024 3:33:00 AM
"a smile wants to bloom...." Perfect!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/7/2024 6:24:00 PM
thank you for your enthusiastic comment, Joe. Have a splendid evening, Sara
Date: 4/6/2024 10:40:00 PM
I adore that last line, Sara. Goes so well with the picture
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/7/2024 6:24:00 PM
thanks for your visit and for your observation about the picture. Much appreciate your continued support, hugs, Sara
Date: 4/6/2024 9:53:00 PM
just subtle and beautiful, you create something here , have a nice sunday
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/7/2024 6:23:00 PM
thank you, Yann...appreciate your visit and kind words.
Date: 4/6/2024 8:16:00 PM
Love how your words capture the look on this young woman’s face. I see a hint of mischief in her face. Cheers, Don
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