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Andrea's Alouette Me Contest * November 22,2024

Moonlight, your soft glow shines on lustrous snow. It glimmers like twinkling lights falling from dark skies. Lovely to my eyes, one of nature's splendid sights. Moonlight, must you go? I will miss your flow. Promise to return each night in glory, profound, your praises resound. You offer me such delight.

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Date: 12/3/2024 7:47:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting from start 'til the end. God bless you.
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Date: 12/3/2024 2:57:00 AM
"Promise to return each night" - Can the moon keep its promise? A very beautiful poem. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/3/2024 5:50:00 AM
thanks
Date: 12/2/2024 11:33:00 PM
Very lovely, Lin. Thanks for taking the challenge and congrats on your win.
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Date: 12/3/2024 5:50:00 AM
ok thanks for the placement
Date: 12/2/2024 8:49:00 PM
delightful write. congratulations dear poet. cheers.
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Date: 12/3/2024 5:49:00 AM
thanks
Date: 11/23/2024 11:59:00 AM
Dear Lin, I had to come and read your new gem. I love the moon and give me a full moon every night I would find delight. Since I cannot have that wish I will read your poem when the moon hides its face. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 11/24/2024 7:15:00 AM
That's a very encouraging message, Daniel and I sincerely appreciate it.
Date: 11/22/2024 12:13:00 PM
Not familiar with the form but if moonlight is involved, count me in. Sweet write, Lin.
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Date: 11/24/2024 7:14:00 AM
It was required for the contest; called Alouette. Thank you, Danny.
Date: 11/22/2024 10:56:00 AM
Nothing more beautiful to see than the moon shining brightly over a snow covered landscape not forgetting the sea. It’s always a great inspiration for poets. Best of luck Lin and enjoy your weekend. Tom
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Date: 11/24/2024 7:13:00 AM
I agree with you, Tom. It's a sight I haven't seen in years, but I'm content without it. Thanks very much.

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