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Soft Caress

. Oh yes so like the feathered being I perched ‘pon the roof with ink and slip missed naught The breeze the sun's soft caress yes even the tricklets of dew tenderly setting ‘pon mine slip from the long pause from write as mine eyes did gaze ( fortuitously) through her pane Unquestionably I was intrigued with the unveiling yet it was her preparing which moved this pen yes hern prime for Spring

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/4/2011 6:08:00 PM
The personification of Spring! The Rite of Spring is lauded by some of the greatest poets. You have done a worthy job announcing and describing this grand ritual.
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Date: 3/26/2011 7:40:00 AM
hmmm, you be peeping on this delightful lady? But never said more beautifully by a peeper. heehee.
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Date: 3/25/2011 1:38:00 PM
thankxx James and yes please share with Noah and yes it is for Francine's new contest.. and yes u are so wonderful to give me so much encouragement..now feast your eyes on Just One Look for Michael's contest ..these words are for your eyes only.. think Noah might be too young yet ..luv..happy weekend..
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Date: 3/25/2011 7:37:00 AM
Beautiful:)
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Date: 3/23/2011 2:43:00 PM
were breaking up with jack frost. john
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Date: 3/23/2011 2:24:00 PM
oooo! I think Spring is sweet on you, James.. I think i'm at my prime.. or just passed it.. but im ready for some more.. I need to bloom again.. out of the mist i will again you will see.. take care,..p.d.
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Date: 3/23/2011 7:59:00 AM
I am totally ready for spring and your poem is very expressive for that season. We have had snow the last two days and this winter season has been to long. Thank you for your kind comments. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 3/23/2011 7:51:00 AM
Very descriptive and expressive work..I hope not a peeping Tom but only enjoying the beauty of spring..Sara
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Date: 3/23/2011 7:43:00 AM
A soft caress are your words so special James.. u infiltrate romance in a unique way .. peering through the window pane while writing... luv the design u write in my friend.. may u also have a wonderful week..poetically .."Sweetheart"...
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Date: 3/23/2011 6:36:00 AM
I am ready for that "unveiling" dear James. This morning - through the night - we had around 7 inches of snow. BUMMER! Your poem, however, reminds me that spring (might be) is on the way. Love, Dave
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Date: 3/23/2011 6:04:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today James . May you have a beautiful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/22/2011 8:34:00 PM
Awesome write that could be referencing nature or a lady, James! Enjoyed this. Hope you and Noah are well. We all can not wait for spring! Always, Annalise
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Date: 3/22/2011 3:00:00 PM
beautiful imagery... her prime fo spring, enjoyed it, James
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Date: 3/22/2011 2:18:00 PM
This is extaordinary free verse, James. Please take a look at Constance's "The Sundress" contest/photo and tell me if you don't think this poem would make a perfect entry for it. I could see you longingly eying her as she was removing the garment. The passion just springs from your poem! Love it and love you, Carolyn
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