Sobs, Comments, and Belly Laughs
Comments to read, comments to read
Sobs and tears, wailing and heartbreak
Comments to read, comments to write
Long flowing pens and paper by the reams
Belly laughs, smiles and inspiring joy
Friends without faces, galliant men on fiery steads
Heroic women with compassionate hearts
Long flowing gowns and rolling landscapes
Comments to read, poetry to write
Escapism from the heartbreaking sobs
Grace for today, thanksgiving in comments
The elixir of the God a balm to his heart...
Everyone helped me to update this poem, Thank you all!!
Copyright © Doris Culverhouse | Year Posted 2010
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