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Sobs, Comments, and Belly Laughs

Comments to read, comments to read Sobs and tears, wailing and heartbreak Comments to read, comments to write Long flowing pens and paper by the reams Belly laughs, smiles and inspiring joy Friends without faces, galliant men on fiery steads Heroic women with compassionate hearts Long flowing gowns and rolling landscapes Comments to read, poetry to write Escapism from the heartbreaking sobs Grace for today, thanksgiving in comments The elixir of the God a balm to his heart... Everyone helped me to update this poem, Thank you all!!

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Date: 11/9/2010 1:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your win...Mom
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Date: 11/9/2010 1:07:00 PM
Many congratulations Doris on your deserved placing in HG's fine contest >> James
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Date: 11/9/2010 9:11:00 AM
lovely entry Doris, congrats on your win in HG's contest
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Date: 11/9/2010 7:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in HG's Contest Doris. Carol
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Date: 11/9/2010 4:46:00 AM
Super congrats Doris on your big win in HG's contest on comments and views luv.. a great expression in words .. wonderfully written luv.. and your last line is super awesome my friend.. enjoy today with lots of luv...
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Date: 10/23/2010 9:48:00 AM
nicely said and done Doris, enjoyed yor poem,..p.d.
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Date: 10/23/2010 6:44:00 AM
Doris, this would be a good entry..Mom
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Date: 10/22/2010 3:12:00 PM
Good luck in he contest..Reads like a winner to me..The circle that gives honor to all the deserving writers..Mom
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Date: 10/22/2010 3:12:00 PM
Outstanding...if this is for the contest...it should do very well, Doris! :)
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Date: 10/22/2010 1:01:00 PM
very lyrical and I think should be read aloud, Doris
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Date: 10/22/2010 9:27:00 AM
Comments to write, comments to write. So much to do, so little time to do it. Nice wrtie Doris - strikes a cord with me. Joe
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Date: 10/22/2010 6:46:00 AM
nice write Doris..keep the ink flowing....TAH
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Date: 10/22/2010 6:28:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poem.
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