Sobriety Not Taken
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February 24, 2020
F G I parody
Brian Strand, sponsor
Inspired by "The Road Not Taken" by Robert Frost
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Two drunks converged in a crowed bar
And sorry that I knew them both
And be one patron, long I stared
Looking out for each I really cared
As both of them bent I swore an oath;
I helped the one, and deemed it fair
He having perhaps the better claim
His eyes more glassy and worse for wear
Though the other also was passed out there
In reality both wasted about the same.
And both next morning equally lay
In heaps, their missteps left them in.
Oh, I wished them both a better day!
Yet knowing how wine can make you stray,
I concluded they both would repeat their sin.
Forever I’ll be telling this with a sigh
Everywhere ages and ages hence:
Two drunks converged in a bar, and I—
I helped the one most frazzled by,
His empty stomach made all the difference
Copyright © Mark Toney | Year Posted 2020
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