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SO TODAY I SO SAY I LOVE YOU-

Love So today So I may I do say I fell in love On my way Until this new day My heartbeat says I'm in love so in love ~ So today I so say On my way I'm in love With Her My heartbeat says I'm in love so in love
11/24/23 Written words by James Edward Lee Sr © 2023

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Date: 11/24/2023 6:18:00 AM
James, your poem is a heartfelt and passionate expression of love. Your words capture the excitement and joy of falling in love and feeling swept off your feet. The repetition of the phrase "I'm in love" emphasizes the depth of your feelings, and the poem's overall tone is pure bliss. Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece of writing with us. - Blessings, Daniel
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