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So Peachy

He so longed to touch
Her peachy tanned tush
When he spied her there on the beach

Lusting from afar 
At her bikini top bra
Each boob looked like a ripe peach

Her juicy pert curves
Would be his hors d’oeuvres 
If his hand her tush he could reach

With his wife by his side
His desires were denied
If she knew, then she’d start to screech!



14th August 2016

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William Smith Date: 8/17/2016 8:03:00 PM This is great. Tom Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/18/2016 11:29:00 AM Thanks William:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso Date: 8/15/2016 6:39:00 PM Hilarious! True, but funny still!!! :) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/15/2016 6:43:00 PM Yes it is very much real lol :-) hugs Jan xx

Seren Roberts Date: 8/15/2016 6:07:00 PM lol Jan its great.......Seren Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/15/2016 6:27:00 PM Thanks Seren I had fun here:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane Date: 8/15/2016 9:23:00 AM This is a prime example of Jan being Jan. Some things never change, and I'm glad you never do. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/15/2016 12:13:00 PM Thanks Lin:-) I had fun with this one lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Vladislav Raven Date: 8/15/2016 8:34:00 AM Hi Jan, like it, i came looking for my fun and as always you came through. Looking at it slightly serious, you see this so often. As a guy i say it does anger me. There must be something wrong with me, i never have done this when i have been at the beach with a lady. I Loved the read. It would have been good for him to get a sock in the eyes for his trouble, then again, playing for fun, that would spoil the whole ambience, what? This is a seven Jan. Hugs....Mike. XX Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/15/2016 12:14:00 PM Thanks Mike - I wrote the poem then found the perfect pic - guess there is no harm in looking... good job his wife wasn't! Hugs Jan xx

Old Man Emu Date: 8/15/2016 5:12:00 AM Ha Ha, Great job Jan, great to read a poem to make you smile, such light hearted humor. Thanks Craig Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/15/2016 5:41:00 AM Thanks Craig :-) the poem only took a few minutes to write and when I found the picture I thought it was perfect:-) hugs Jan xx

Phillip Garcia Date: 8/15/2016 2:32:00 AM Ha!! That's past fabulous. Imagery has been conquered by you on this. Good stuff ++ Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/15/2016 2:35:00 AM ha ha ha - told you I was working on my imagery lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer Date: 8/14/2016 7:03:00 PM jan, you've outdone yourself with this one! just perfect and so much fun! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/14/2016 7:05:00 PM Thanks Ilene I'm glad it made you smile, it only took about 4 minutes to write lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Lynn Marie Date: 8/14/2016 6:11:00 PM Wonderful Jan...The picture is soooo perfect for your very succinct and sassy rhyme with a great title too! Everything about this made me smile...I will definitely revisit as I imagine the "comments" will be just as lively :-) blessings, lynn Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/14/2016 6:14:00 PM Thanks Lynn:-) I wrote the poem then found the picture which fitted so perfectly lol:-) hugs Jan xx

John Lawless Date: 8/14/2016 5:58:00 PM Men look, dogs sniff fire hydrants, we're animals.... Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/14/2016 5:59:00 PM That comment made me smile John:-) Hugs Jan xx

Mike Martin Date: 8/14/2016 5:41:00 PM Jan, you really captured a moment there. In defense of men every where ... how could any real man NOT feel that way? Well done, Jan!! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/14/2016 5:43:00 PM LOL Great comment there Mike:-) hugs Jan xx

Charmaine Chircop Date: 8/14/2016 3:49:00 PM Wahaha lol...Loved this poem of yours..and hate when guys are with wives and oogle that way..Makes me wanna hit them in the Ahem:) :) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/14/2016 3:52:00 PM Ha ha ha Charma :-) hugs Jan xx

Barry Stebbings Date: 8/14/2016 2:20:00 PM Ha, Ha, yes, Jan. Very funny. Barry. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/14/2016 2:23:00 PM Cheers Barry:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/14/2016 1:21:00 PM - He can console himself with ...... they are not real :))) - Plastic make perfect :))) - A wonderful smile poem, Jan :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/14/2016 1:41:00 PM Ha ha ha love that comment Anne Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y. Date: 8/14/2016 1:03:00 PM Hi Jan, I loved this humorous write. She would probably screetch and a few other things lol! :-)Alexis Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 8/14/2016 1:10:00 PM LOL Alexis - I wrote the poem then found the perfect pic lol:-) hugs Jan xx