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So Peachy

He so longed to touch
Her peachy tanned tush
When he spied her there on the beach

Lusting from afar 
At her bikini top bra
Each boob looked like a ripe peach

Her juicy pert curves
Would be his hors d’oeuvres 
If his hand her tush he could reach

With his wife by his side
His desires were denied
If she knew, then she’d start to screech!



14th August 2016

beachbodydesirehumorouslustrhyme

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William Smith

August 17, 2016 at 8:03 PM

This is great. Tom

Jan Allison

August 18, 2016 at 11:29 AM

Thanks William:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

August 15, 2016 at 6:39 PM

Hilarious! True, but funny still!!! :)

Jan Allison

August 15, 2016 at 6:43 PM

Yes it is very much real lol :-) hugs Jan xx

Seren Roberts

August 15, 2016 at 6:07 PM

lol Jan its great.......Seren

Jan Allison

August 15, 2016 at 6:27 PM

Thanks Seren I had fun here:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane

August 15, 2016 at 9:23 AM

This is a prime example of Jan being Jan. Some things never change, and I'm glad you never do.

Jan Allison

August 15, 2016 at 12:13 PM

Thanks Lin:-) I had fun with this one lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Vladislav Raven

August 15, 2016 at 8:34 AM

Hi Jan, like it, i came looking for my fun and as always you came through. Looking at it slightly serious, you see this so often. As a guy i say it does anger me. There must be something wrong with me, i never have done this when i have been at the beach with a lady. I Loved the read. It would have been good for him to get a sock in the eyes for his trouble, then again, playing for fun, that would spoil the whole ambience, what? This is a seven Jan. Hugs....Mike. XX

Jan Allison

August 15, 2016 at 12:14 PM

Thanks Mike - I wrote the poem then found the perfect pic - guess there is no harm in looking... good job his wife wasn't! Hugs Jan xx

Old Man Emu

August 15, 2016 at 5:12 AM

Ha Ha, Great job Jan, great to read a poem to make you smile, such light hearted humor. Thanks Craig

Jan Allison

August 15, 2016 at 5:41 AM

Thanks Craig :-) the poem only took a few minutes to write and when I found the picture I thought it was perfect:-) hugs Jan xx

Phillip Garcia

August 15, 2016 at 2:32 AM

Ha!! That's past fabulous. Imagery has been conquered by you on this. Good stuff ++

Jan Allison

August 15, 2016 at 2:35 AM

ha ha ha - told you I was working on my imagery lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer

August 14, 2016 at 7:03 PM

jan, you've outdone yourself with this one! just perfect and so much fun!

Jan Allison

August 14, 2016 at 7:05 PM

Thanks Ilene I'm glad it made you smile, it only took about 4 minutes to write lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Lynn Marie

August 14, 2016 at 6:11 PM

Wonderful Jan...The picture is soooo perfect for your very succinct and sassy rhyme with a great title too! Everything about this made me smile...I will definitely revisit as I imagine the "comments" will be just as lively :-) blessings, lynn

Jan Allison

August 14, 2016 at 6:14 PM

Thanks Lynn:-) I wrote the poem then found the picture which fitted so perfectly lol:-) hugs Jan xx