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Written for the Glenn Hughes contest sponsored by Robert James Liguori

i chose the song " so much love to give" by glenn hughes.

Still havent figured out how to attach songs so please have a look at the song. This poem is inspired by the song.... 

 

O beloved rose in my garden of fairy-lamps, would you bloom in hues of stardust? let the daffodil moon envy this fragrant field of immortal lyrics~ for I’ll treat you with kindness, scatter herbs of compassion, with picturesque patience, water your greying petals~ until every fading pigment turns into ruby red, as this heart craves to feel the heat of your diamond dialect. When I close my eyes I know your smile adorns the hazy horizon like the citrine crescent meant to unfurl crystalline-streaked promises, so let me stroll through that astral realm a little longer, sleep deeply to become your blanket of chamomile balm~ where your emerald embrace can wipe away fogs of foes, getting in the way of you and I~ as I’ve got so much love to give. So will you dance through dewy darkness with me? where dreams do color frozen lakes to stream in tints of turquoise delight, your vanilla initials flow and glow through these amorous veins, illuminating bruised cells, aching to break through~ as I’ve got so much love to give. Tonight, I’m sailing adrift, the unknown abyss of lemongrass longing, that never felt better, before I heard the musky musings of your aesthetic aura, croon the charismatic chorus that defines the ethereal essence of this radiant romance. Scriptures of tomorrow may not be sealed, although the wind may be carrying these poems I’ve prayed for, today’s footsteps shall guide us through. Perhaps, the world shouldn’t know, as wicked waves of heinous time may jinx the jasmine jitters~ fluttering like green-gold butterflies. Some songs are to be heard just by the Goddess of Luna that slumbers when midnight melodies soar, and this love, I’ll serenade, for an eternity and more, if only you would let silence break into musical meteors~ whisper saccharine symphonies, allow cosmos to swirl to your graceful voice. I hope you’ll always remember, my heart knew not syllables of gratitude wrapped with selflessness, nor did these breathless fingers ever ink metaphors of warmth, yet your tender touch quenched my weathered quill, and in your presence galaxies shimmer multicolored fireflies~ and I stand here, beneath the mulberry mercy, laced with lavender love, in shades of twilight to scarf your your silhouette~ when it bleeds wintry loneliness. Shall we waltz to our heartbeats, until the sun caresses our infatuated skin? and the morning sapphires sprinkle~ pixie-dust upon our thoughts, awakening us to a beloved sphere of never-ending endearments, connected way before I’ve woven poetic confessions of true desires… The universe heard wind of yearning, rising, as we ascend as angels struck by Cupid~ free from evil eyes which prowl in jealousy amidst the nightfalls that strike in symphony of “we", echoing the tuscan truth that you deserve to learn; I wish you’d stay~ I’ve got so much love to give.

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Date: 4/18/2024 9:34:00 AM
I love, love when I should. You have the strength for everything dear Ink. You explore and dance in tunes when you want. "where your emerald embrace can wipe away fogs of foes." Thank comfort of our loved one will make all the bugs go away. Congratulations on your beautiful win.
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Date: 4/20/2024 5:22:00 AM
Awwn you are such a beautiful soul! I appreciate you beyond words can ever describe! Thank you so much
Date: 4/18/2024 5:36:00 AM
Aww look who wrote a pretty love song, and a winner to boot. You can do love, light, darkness and everything in between. Nice win inky
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Date: 4/20/2024 5:23:00 AM
Thank you so very much tomsz, i appreciate your kindness and support always
Date: 4/16/2024 7:53:00 PM
How can you get any better than that? This is so touching, so beautiful. I really cannot form a reply worthy. It was perfect. Congrats on your win, lovely Ink- lots of heart and light <3
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Date: 4/20/2024 5:23:00 AM
Thank you so very much sweet paige appreciate you always
Date: 4/16/2024 8:30:00 AM
Congratulations on a Trophy win Empress! A beautiful song, bluesy.(Right click on the video as its playing and copy [embedded code] then paste into the box below hit embedded video code tab then update the poem). "Some songs are to be heard just by the Goddess of Luna that slumbers when midnight melodies soar, and this love, I’ll serenade, for an eternity and more" your words shine lustfully, blissfully the way they are broughton together! I'll get the Champaign! Beauty and song in my heart~Anaya:D
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Date: 4/20/2024 5:23:00 AM
Awwn this is so sweet thank you dear anaya! I appreciate you so very much truly
Date: 4/14/2024 9:32:00 PM
Dear Empress, as ever, I got carried away by the beauty of this composition and the depth of emotion revealed in this exquisite poem. I couldn't but notice the effect of the alliterative phraseology and the sweet resonance it has created through your lavish use of them all through the poem.To mention a few, 'picturesque patience, diamond dialect, citrine crescent, blanket of chamomile balm, emerald embrace, dewy darkness, musky musings, aesthetic aura, jasmine jitters, midnight melodies, musical meteors, saccharine symphonies,' Tuscan truth et al. You alone can juggle with so many of them at a stretch. Congratulations gifted friend for your well deserved trophy win.
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Date: 4/16/2024 2:38:00 AM
Awwn sweet valsa you are truly such a kind and generous soul, i was having a bad migraine attack but to receive this was such an honor really! I am humbled and touched by your kindness always! You really are a ray of light
Date: 4/14/2024 7:32:00 PM
G'day.. You have soup mail. & Congrats.
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Date: 4/16/2024 2:37:00 AM
Thank you so very much for the soupmail and congrats, i appreciate your support truly
Date: 4/11/2024 8:10:00 PM
This lyrical beauty truly grips my heart, the love whispered in this mesmeric piece is infinitely ardent and divine! You truly are a poetic soul weaving heavenly verses of soul stirring balladry, my beautiful soul sis! Breathtaking diction indescribably ethereal, swimming in its star-studded imagery! Your artistry always leaves me breathless, with such sparkling sentiments drizzled throughout and within! Wishing I could quote your whole poem, for I can’t choose enough to do this grace and love
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Date: 4/11/2024 8:11:00 PM
Enough honor that it more than deserves! You are truly a favorite poetess of mine, forever inspired and honored to follow on this glorious writing journey, amazing poetess!
Date: 4/11/2024 10:04:00 AM
What a lucky rose that is.. I will teach you how to do the youtube links when I see you soon dear poet.. You wrote a remarkable poem, seeing like me, you had never listened to this artist.. As the poem unfolds, it becomes a testament to the enduring nature of love, resilient against the passage of time and the trials of life. The speaker's vow to serenade their love for eternity and more, to whisper saccharine symphonies and scarf their silhouette in shades of twilight, is a poignant expression of commitment and devotion.
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Date: 4/14/2024 7:33:00 PM
I sent Empress a Soup mail with detailed instructions.
Date: 4/10/2024 5:32:00 PM
Your words were as inspiration and romantic as the song was. So many delightful metaphors and images. I especially liked: the morning sapphires sprinkle~ pixie-dust upon our thoughts, awakening us to a beloved sphere. Your poem was both enchanting and mesmerizing. Best wishes with the contest, hugs, Sara
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Date: 4/11/2024 12:40:00 AM
Thank you sara
Date: 4/10/2024 2:38:00 PM
A beautifully romantic poem. Good luck with the contest.
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Date: 4/11/2024 12:40:00 AM
Always grateful for you dear hilda
Date: 4/10/2024 2:20:00 PM
Beautiful song and a beautiful poem to match its heartfelt tenor, my friend. I like how you used "I’ve got so much love to give" as a refrain to adorn the voice of love. A splendid rendition dwelling in metaphors, Ink.--so let me stroll through that astral realm a little longer, sleep deeply to become your blanket of chamomile balm---where dreams do color frozen lakes to stream in tints of turquoise delight--and so much more! A FAVE for me.
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Date: 4/11/2024 1:42:00 AM
Dear Vijay, this is so kind of you really, your comments are always sincere and i appreciate that really. Thank you so much for the fave too. Im beyond grateful
Date: 4/10/2024 1:17:00 PM
- I didn't know the song ... but, looked it up ... a wonderful poem, Glenn Hughes should read it :) - Best wishes in the contest, Ink :) - hugs
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Date: 4/10/2024 11:56:00 AM
Wow, Ink, you went all out with your song. Very beautiful and for sure it shows " so much love to give"
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Date: 4/10/2024 10:01:00 AM
This poem Ink has written highlights why I run these contests every month… to see what beautiful masterpieces can be written. I love this poem with all my heart and have reread it several times already. Thank you for doing Glenn Hughes justice… he is my favorite singer and your words amplify his greatness. Keep up the good work… you should do well in the contest.
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Date: 4/10/2024 9:01:00 AM
Dear Empress, What a mesmerizing ode to love's boundless depths. I loved how each line drips with passion and longing, and devotion. Your scenes, from the fragrant garden to the celestial dance, captivate my soul. I also loved how your words, like a soothing balm, offer peace in the tumult of life. You nailed the power of love to transcend time and space. Empress, his is such a heartfelt expression of affection. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 4/10/2024 6:59:00 AM
Dear Ink, This poem is truly remarkable, with its profound depth and emotional intensity. It revolves around Glenn Hughes's song and beautifully expresses a heartfelt declaration of love and longing for a cherished rose. The imagery in your writing is truly captivating, taking the reader on a journey to a world filled with beauty and romance. The use of different literary devices, like metaphor, simile, personification, and alliteration, enhances the vivid imagery, effectively capturing the intensity of emotions. The precision with which you have chosen your words truly captures a sense of beauty and tenderness that deeply resonates with the reader. In addition, the smooth integration of longer and shorter lines gives the poem a fluid and musical quality, capturing a feeling of motion and unity.
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Date: 4/10/2024 4:42:00 AM
Creative lines penned. Thanks for sharing your contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara K
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Date: 4/10/2024 4:38:00 AM
daffodil moon envy this fragrant field of immortal lyrics… ooo love that line… water your greying petals until every fading pigment turns into ruby red,.. oooo the romance… your smile adorns the hazy horizon like the citrine crescent meant to unfurl crystalline-streaked promises, allow cosmos to swirl to your graceful voice. in love with the architecture of ur piece papi.. it goes with the song perfectly
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Date: 4/10/2024 2:49:00 AM
The poem matches the song so much … loved reading it from the start to end . You always nail it . Like this time .
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Date: 4/10/2024 4:22:00 AM
Awwn dahlin i always appreciate your support

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