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So Fragile

I look in a mirror or at a photograph of me and see the deep scars (that are hidden within) . . . this face reflected is perfectly symmetrical the skin smooth and the lips lush eyes brown and fathomless (deep as an ocean) hair like a stream flowing, flowing and flowing and a hint of a smile . . . but my concept of self is distorted like a Picasso painting each time I meet myself again again, again and again . . . can people see the real me ? can they see I am encased in concrete ? that this perfect face is a fake ? that all I want is to float and drift (a leaf in the wind) can they ? can they see that I am like stained glass so fragile . . . can they ? ______________________________________ December 17, 2019- Edit March 9, 2021 Poetry/Verse/so fragile Copyright Protected, ID 03-1335-146-09 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Submitted to the Standard contest, All Yours (Mar 10) sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 03/10/2021 First Place

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Date: 3/11/2021 10:44:00 AM
Congrats on your contest win as well! I really do so enjoy your poem.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/11/2021 4:18:00 PM
Frankii, thanks for the congrats and happy your liked my poem _Constance
Date: 3/9/2021 10:02:00 AM
You hide your fragility sometimes, Constance, but your poetry reveals your compassionate and sensitive side. Being sensitive does make us fragile, but it also makes us more loving as friends. Such a beautiful poem, Dear! I'm sure it will be a winner in Brian's contest. Hugs, CArolyn
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Constance La France
Date: 3/9/2021 10:18:00 AM
Carolyn, in poetry is the only time I can be me, thank you for the compliment on my poem, as for a win, we never know until the contest is finalized _ Constance
Date: 3/9/2021 9:36:00 AM
Brilliant poem. So introspect yet with great imagery.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/9/2021 10:19:00 AM
Victor, thanks for the compliment on my poem, appreciate _Constance
Date: 3/9/2021 9:35:00 AM
This is a fave. "can people see the real me ? can they see I am encased in concrete ?"
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Constance La France
Date: 3/9/2021 10:21:00 AM
Caren , thanks for the FAV and the comment, appreciated _Constance

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