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So fat, the coffee mug jumping and grinning, after my flat feet slap the pergo, just right cold. Lifeless hair, matters not in waking up. no lipstick on the fat rim. just joy, joy, joy of the caffeinated audience in my steaming cup of joe. jubilation of thought frothing on the top. no pressure, peopleless with pleasure. the day ahead, my behind a treasure. 11/23/2020

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Date: 11/27/2020 12:32:00 PM
There was a joyfulness that pranced through my head as I read this Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/27/2020 1:17:00 PM
Yay! Be joyful, my friend!
Date: 11/23/2020 5:24:00 PM
Ha, ha! What a romp. Great way to start the day: With a full behind of steam! lol. Hilarious, Kim! :) gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/23/2020 5:59:00 PM
LOL! :)
Date: 11/23/2020 9:58:00 AM
haha, the last part was great word play!! (well, if a person really were fat, it would be!) Great imagery.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/23/2020 10:46:00 AM
LOL...thanks, Andrea!
Date: 11/23/2020 9:43:00 AM
Ah you make me dream of when I used to visit Rome so often and each time a coffee stretto with its delightful aroma and a juicy sweet pastry. ~~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/23/2020 10:45:00 AM
And I just visited there with you...thanks! :)
Date: 11/23/2020 5:45:00 AM
You speak for many with these splendid lines, Kim---jubilation of thought frothing on the top. no pressure, people-less with pleasure--
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/23/2020 6:58:00 AM
Thanks so much, Vijay!

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