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So Close

I wait in my quiet, the evening is still deep in its own. Nothing moves. Moonlight casts eerie shadows beneath the tall trees. Something wants to speak. I sense a fear, a reluctance to leave the dark cover of the evening, to come forward and approach me. And yet nothing betrays the still except now the soft whispers of leaves rippling unseen high in the canopy overhead. Please speak… But there is only the barely audible chatter of leaves. It seems to know me and has, for so long, been waiting in my silence. There are times when I can almost hear it breathe. Tonight it is particularly close, so near that I feel a part of it is reaching out to touch my hand but then, pulls back. It is so afraid, so in need of love.

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Date: 3/20/2024 6:06:00 PM
Great poem, Paul! Really like the way you externalized the feeling of solitude. Very clever -
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Paul Willason
Date: 3/21/2024 2:12:00 AM
Thanks John for taking the time to read and comment. Good to hear from you...regards Paul
Date: 3/19/2024 8:12:00 PM
Hello Paul, What a haunting exploration of solitude and longing, with nature as a silent but powerful presence. I love the imagery of the quiet evening, the moonlight, and the rustling leaves creates a palpable atmosphere of introspection and anticipation. Your poetic words evoke a sense of connection with the natural world, as if it holds secrets waiting to be discovered. The longing for communication and understanding showed us of the universal desire for connection and love. Paul truly a poignant reflection on the complexities of human emotion and the mysteries of nature. Blessings, Daniel
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Paul Willason
Date: 3/21/2024 2:11:00 AM
Dazzling interpretation and commentary Daniel...so appreciative of the effort you put into the exercise. A sincere thankyou my friend.
Date: 3/19/2024 3:34:00 PM
Hi Paul....just beautiful with an air of mystery and intrigue. It actually gave me a sense of fear and anxiety. How differently beautiful words expressed can make us feel....as per usual l was right there Ha! Debx
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Paul Willason
Date: 3/21/2024 1:58:00 AM
Thanks Deb for your feedback...I suppose the mystery adds a bit of tension to the poem. My appreciation for entering into it...take care my friend.

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