So Close


I wait in my quiet,
the evening is still deep
in its own. Nothing moves.
Moonlight casts eerie shadows
beneath the tall trees. Something
wants to speak.

I sense a fear, a reluctance
to leave the dark cover
of the evening, to come forward
and approach me. And yet
nothing betrays the still
except now the soft whispers
of leaves rippling unseen 
high in the canopy overhead. 

Please speak…
But there is only the barely 
audible chatter of leaves.
It seems to know me
and has, for so long, 
been waiting in my silence.
There are times when
I can almost hear it breathe.

Tonight it is particularly close,
so near that I feel
a part of it is reaching out
to touch my hand but then,
pulls back. It is so afraid,
so in need of love.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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March 20, 2024 at 6:06 PM
Great poem, Paul! Really like the way you externalized the feeling of solitude. Very clever -
Willason Avatar
March 21, 2024 at 2:12 AM
Thanks John for taking the time to read and comment. Good to hear from you...regards Paul
Rodgers Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 8:12 PM
Hello Paul, What a haunting exploration of solitude and longing, with nature as a silent but powerful presence. I love the imagery of the quiet evening, the moonlight, and the rustling leaves creates a palpable atmosphere of introspection and anticipation. Your poetic words evoke a sense of connection with the natural world, as if it holds secrets waiting to be discovered. The longing for communication and understanding showed us of the universal desire for connection and love. Paul truly a poignant reflection on the complexities of human emotion and the mysteries of nature. Blessings, Daniel
Willason Avatar
March 21, 2024 at 2:11 AM
Dazzling interpretation and commentary Daniel...so appreciative of the effort you put into the exercise. A sincere thankyou my friend.
M  Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 3:34 PM
Hi Paul....just beautiful with an air of mystery and intrigue. It actually gave me a sense of fear and anxiety. How differently beautiful words expressed can make us feel....as per usual l was right there Ha! Debx
Willason Avatar
March 21, 2024 at 1:58 AM
Thanks Deb for your feedback...I suppose the mystery adds a bit of tension to the poem. My appreciation for entering into it...take care my friend.
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