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Snowy Travel

Slipping and sliding on glazed, snowy roads No plows in sight and no sand to unload Maybe no-one paid their taxes this year The roads may be this bad for miles I fear I am gripping the steering wheel, very tight All I can see is two tire tracks in white It’s a long ride through this storm that won’t end As the snow still falls, with a safe message to send On the way home, roads are clear to the pavement Quality of this day time, ended up well spent Now, I had the chance to take my eyes off the street Enjoy the scenery I passed, a wintry treat Bushes were covered like cotton balls, with snow Evergreen branches hung over real low Wind blew clouds of snow in bursts, passing through Winter shaking and flying, flakes fresh and new Suddenly, from gray a globe of sun peeked some light With gratitude for what could have been a plight I arrive safely home to comfort and warmth inside Now, I look through the window at winter outside Heidi Sands 12/3/19

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Date: 12/4/2019 10:30:00 AM
Nice winter scenario in a flowing verse, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/4/2019 10:54:00 AM
Thank you very much Subimal :)
Date: 12/3/2019 9:22:00 PM
You had me tense there for you, my friend... and then 'Bushes were covered like cotton balls, with snow.' --- What a gorgeous image. Wonderful powers of perception you have! Cheers, Gershon
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/3/2019 9:34:00 PM
Thank you for your comment Gershon. I am glad the clear roads and pretty sights came about later :)
Date: 12/3/2019 3:57:00 PM
Details in your poetry unfold a winter scene--like being there--the reader experiences what you did--excellent write and imagery, Heidi. Glad the journey was safe..enjoy the winter from your window.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/3/2019 4:24:00 PM
Thank you Vijay. I am happy to hear that and yes, happy to be home safe! The plows were not out until afternoon and the roads were very bad. I hope you are well :)
Date: 12/3/2019 2:56:00 PM
Beautifully done Heidi and I remember those white knuckle drives through the snow. Thankfully I only remember them, I know have to experience them. : )
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Date: 12/3/2019 4:23:00 PM
Thank you , Chris. Yes, it sure was like that. You must like , not having to deal with that now :)

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