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SNOWFLAKIES

Snowflakes float
Whimsically on the wind
	Drift
		Soar
			Fall  
	Gentle merging of 
		Terrestrial elements 
Seeking 
	Cosmic order of
		Patterned perfection
Children frolic with Frosty 
	Making snowmen and 
		Snow angels
Snowflakes melt
	Swept aside by
Busy wipers on
	Sliding cars on
		Slippery roads
With dizzy drivers
	Seeking stars and
		Sparkling moonbeams
On lonely roads
	In lonely lives
		Where snowflakes fall

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 2/1/2019 5:49:00 AM
Nice! You express vivid pictures with your words.
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Mel Gill
Date: 2/1/2019 6:27:00 AM
Thanks for this and your comments on my other poems, Valerie. My book: 'Birth to Death and Points in Between: "A book of poems, perceptions, reflections, and inspiration" will be released mid-year. Regards, Mel
Date: 1/27/2019 9:23:00 AM
Snowflakes are unique just like we are! I like your line sparkling moonbeams.
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Mel Gill
Date: 2/1/2019 6:28:00 AM
Thanks, Susannah. My book: 'Birth to Death and Points in Between: "A book of poems, perceptions, reflections, and inspiration" will be released mid-year. Regards, Mel
Date: 1/21/2019 6:33:00 PM
That describes the snow perfectly, well done Mel
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Mel Gill
Date: 1/22/2019 2:20:00 AM
Thanks, Bobby. You're ahead of the game. I didn't write my first poem until I was 17. Keep at it. Mel
Date: 1/19/2019 11:16:00 PM
Mel, this is lovely; even though we are trying to dig ourselves out of a foot and a half of snow over ice, it still makes me happy. Lovely lovely lovely!
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Mel Gill
Date: 1/20/2019 9:48:00 AM
Thanks for this as well, Caren. I'm within weeks of publishing a book under the title: Birth to Death and Points in Between: A book of poems, perceptions, reflections and inspiration: More to come. Best!
Date: 1/19/2019 6:11:00 PM
Hello Mel,so nice to meet you. Welcome to poetry soup. I have enjoyed your poetry. Children like to play in the snow. have a nice evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/21/2019 1:59:00 PM
You must be proud of yourself. Good for you.
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Mel Gill
Date: 1/19/2019 6:23:00 PM
Thanks so much for the feedback, Darlene. I'm within weeks of publishing a book of poetry with over 100 poems written when I was 17. Watch for the title: Birth to Death and Points in Between: A book of poems, perceptions, reflections and inspiration.