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Snowflakes With Biting Teeth Oh, beautiful snowflakes, so pure and so white, from heaven, you fell thru the darkness of night. This morn I awoke to your splendor so bright 'neath blue sky and sunshine, my new-day delight. Behind my cold window, I take in the sight, yet cozy and warmed by the sun's soothing light. A blanket of snow hugs the landscape on-site... but now comes a thought that uncovers my fright. The squirrels and rabbits, birds landing from flight; the deer, fox, coyote, that roam come twilight... I think of their feet, and somehow it's not right this lovely scene hides frosty snowflakes that bite. A human I am...and I cringe at their plight! Though nature provides...sparing painful frostbite. Sandra M. Haight ~6th Place~ Premiere Contest: Cool Writes and Imagination Sponsor: Kim Rodrigues Judged: 11/28/2018 Sonnet was written in Anapestic Tetrameter, using Monorhyme

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Date: 11/29/2018 3:31:00 AM
Happy Holidays, Sandra - blessings and sincere congratulations for your excellent win in Kim's "Cool Writes & Imagination" contest ... keep up the great work, my friend! This was fun! :-) <3
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/30/2018 4:35:00 PM
Thank you, Greg, and a Happy Holiday season to you too! I appreciate your visit, congratulations, and very supportive comments very much. Sandra <3 :)
Date: 11/28/2018 5:46:00 PM
nicely done, Sandra, congratulations on your win. I'm under the flannel covers right now... :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/30/2018 4:33:00 PM
Thank you, Eve, for your congrats and support! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 11/28/2018 1:24:00 PM
Sandra, I love your nature write! It sounds like you wish you could bring the animals inside. You capture the beauty of the snow but also its bite! Congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/30/2018 4:33:00 PM
Thank you again, Kim, for another fine contest! I am so pleased that you enjoyed my poem and thank you for my fine placement. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 11/24/2018 8:59:00 AM
You crafted such beautiful images Sandra and I too wonder how the little creatures survive! A wonderful entry for the contest, Good Luck xxoo
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/30/2018 4:32:00 PM
Thank you so much, Mike, for your very empathetic and supportive comments! Much appreciated. Sandra :)
Date: 11/23/2018 1:59:00 PM
Another amazing composition, Sandra. What an inventive way to interpret the title!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/30/2018 4:31:00 PM
Thank you so much, Wendy, for your supportive and uplifting comments. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 11/23/2018 11:21:00 AM
Well written poem Sandra :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/30/2018 4:30:00 PM
Thank you very much, Heidi! Hugs, Sandra

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