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As quiet as a whisper swirling snowflakes begin tumbling and twirling as they fall gently from the sky sparkling like jewels as sunlight reflects off crystals of ice, coating flakes of snow in the guise of white. (Yalto) 12/15/2022 Writing Challenge - Yalto Form Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 12/28/2022 7:18:00 AM
Emile, a truly lovely Yalto, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - Yalto Form, well done, and I love the image used, blessings
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Date: 12/28/2022 7:33:00 AM
Thanks, Constance, I appreciate the placement and your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/21/2022 5:56:00 PM
Emile, a gorgeous poem, congratulations on your winning placement! Happy Holidays!
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Date: 12/21/2022 6:23:00 PM
Thanks, Tania, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/20/2022 10:19:00 AM
- Beautiful to read ... beautiful to look at - Congratulations on your win :) - I wish you a lovely Christmas, Emile :) - hugs
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Date: 12/20/2022 1:18:00 PM
Thanks, Sunshine, I appreciate your comments, Merry Christmas my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/20/2022 9:08:00 AM
Beautiful and soft as snow. Congratulations on First Place!
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Date: 12/20/2022 1:17:00 PM
Thanks, Ann, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/20/2022 4:40:00 AM
Congratulations on this winner. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara
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Date: 12/20/2022 8:02:00 AM
Thanks, Sara, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/20/2022 12:50:00 AM
"as whispers in a church" - Great simile. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/20/2022 8:02:00 AM
Thanks, Christuraj, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/19/2022 6:56:00 PM
A beauty, Emile! CONGRATULATIONS,
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Date: 12/20/2022 8:03:00 AM
Thanks, Kim, I appreciate it, my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/19/2022 3:50:00 PM
Fantastically done, Emile:-) You're a true master of the form. Congratulations on your top win!
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Date: 12/15/2022 2:33:00 PM
This is a beautiful mental image Emile. For some of us in the "deep" south, that is an image only seen in paintings. The best we may have rarely seen is a thin layer that quickly turns to slush.
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Date: 12/15/2022 6:20:00 PM
Thanks, FJ, I appreciate your comments, snow can be quite beautiful as it falls in big fluffy flakes, my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/15/2022 11:32:00 AM
Hello Emile, As i read this poem I vision the lakes snowflakes slowly coming to the ground spreading outward. Merry Christmas Email. Your Friend, /Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/15/2022 2:40:00 PM
Hello Emile, Emile you are welcome. Wishing you a Mery Christmas my friend. /Darlene
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Date: 12/15/2022 12:13:00 PM
Thanks, Darlene, it always feels good to hear from you, I appreciate it, Merry Christmas my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/15/2022 9:57:00 AM
Emile, your Yalto is as soft and gentle as sparkling flakes of snow and as beautiful as the scene they create! Best wishes for the contest. Blessing of beauty to you for a Merry Christmas. This would make a lovely Christmas card!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 12/15/2022 10:05:00 AM
Thanks, Sam, you honor me, enjoy the Holidays my friend, Emile.

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