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SNOW GLOBE

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SNOW GLOBE

Welcome to my ----- life
A beautiful broken aura
             Unsettled flakes
             The sound of yesterday
             Shattered winter glass
Transcend to the unconscious mind
Frozen, dead, yet alive
Hell, escapes my future of eternal suffering 
Tiny buttons of snow -fall to my feet
Firewood burns endlessly,
The hairs of her soft skin rise like wheat
Shadows by hand flip the hourglass
The possibility of change takes  --- need
She stands on the outside of my dreams
Looking in;
Quietly she summons the cold legion 
Confused, trying to cleanse her soul 
She wipes off old fingerprints 

White glitter, forgotten notes
Spiritual spells enhanced in a quiet villa
Shadows of hands toss the glow
Daydreaming inside another dream
Falling flakes in hopes of peace
A warm bedded cabin sits at ease
Observing, breathing, mind settling
Swirling into an earthy feel
Another long downward drift
 
Shadows of hands set the tide
She awakens, sharing the stars
She mocks the sun, her eyes sparkle
Covered in snow - aging peacefully
She fibers to soothe her soul
She reeks, neither heaven nor hell
Temporary punishment, rattling thoughts
Captured in a transparent globe
Passing through a purgatory world
No walls, no in between
Falling far from the echoes of life
Sacrificed by death before salvation 
Transcending to the unconscious mind
             Shattered winter glass
             The sound of yesterday
             Unsettled flakes
A beautiful broken aura
Depart from my ----- life             

By: PD

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Date: 8/9/2017 8:53:00 PM
You paint a picture with your words. This poem is beautiful. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 2/10/2017 8:42:00 PM
Just noticed. I can't soupmail you any more?? I hope you are ok, PD!!
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Date: 10/21/2016 1:27:00 PM
Beautifully eerie poem, PD. I can see the creative genius behind this stellar write. Very expressive poem. Great work. Love and peace to you from RW.
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Date: 4/12/2016 4:54:00 AM
Nice imagery. U created a sacred & heavenly feelings in ur snow globe. Entire poem is enriched with so many great lines. I feel a pleasant feeling after reading.Whenever I am writing comment on ur poem, my soul is always remembering me, poem is written by Linda.So nice of u............with love
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Date: 2/17/2016 1:18:00 AM
Perfect......
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Date: 2/16/2016 6:02:00 PM
This reaches my imagination's imagination! I have a snow globe-I'll look at it differently now!
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Date: 2/14/2016 4:32:00 PM
Hi Linda, you have a way of making your dramatic verse heard, sometimes loudly but sometimes so gently. There is always such emotions at play in your work. By the way, i also have you down as a favourite poet Linda. I see the journey and i follow the journey that you take us through. We experience the emotions and visions that your words do portray. Your work always has meaning, keep bringing it forth. A seven and into my faves.
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Date: 12/29/2015 10:55:00 PM
I really enjoyed that one give it a 7..
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Date: 12/11/2015 4:07:00 PM
Your poems exhibit your ability to transcend here...I.e, simple reality and travel to where your mind journeys, you also have a great way of taking the reader there. I believe your free verse is full of soul. Thanks.
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Date: 9/24/2015 8:57:00 AM
Hello my ever loving sis and BFF of mine. I'm dropping by tonight to say Hello and read what I've missed here. This is absolutely deep and fascinating write creatively crafted from your golden ink my dearest sis! I'm so grateful, glad and honored to read it tonight. Belated warm congrats on this superb piece! Adoring it and thank you sooo much. Btw, how are you? Hope you're doing well. Our month is coming! Sending my love, smiles, hugs and kisses! Mising you my forever poet sis-BFF,Leonora
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Date: 9/23/2015 11:34:00 AM
Hi Linda, The first poem of yours that I have read,you have an awesome way with words,and the feelings and emotions expressed in this piece is nothing short of spectacular.A stellar piece and its obviously going into my fav.
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Date: 9/19/2015 6:03:00 PM
Showers of applause to your WIN Linda! ;-)
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Date: 9/17/2015 9:38:00 PM
What a spell you weave with your words. The first five lines and the last five so similar yet a world of difference. You transport me into another world with this awesome poem. Great write. 7+++ ...fav
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Date: 9/16/2015 10:47:00 PM
Love snow globes, and love this wonderful thoughts put forth here, linda, take care only a few more to go but i do love this work, cheri
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Date: 9/16/2015 9:47:00 AM
One of my favorites, congrats. Hugs Rick
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Date: 9/16/2015 1:08:00 AM
Wonderful poem n win Linda ! Big congrats!
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Date: 9/15/2015 8:35:00 PM
Congrats on a fine win Lindsey
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Date: 9/15/2015 7:16:00 PM
a return visit to congratulations on your win hugs eve
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Date: 9/15/2015 5:45:00 PM
Linda, your creativity and imagination are fantastically displayed in this most unusual of poems! Wonderful job, and congrats on your win :)
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Date: 9/8/2015 12:50:00 PM
A great sensational poem very deeply penned with diamond ink of your nice insight. There can be no shadow under the Sun, you have clearly pictured with in the framework of mind. You genius is always genius. Thanks for your support my *friend. Loved always,bl
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Date: 9/6/2015 1:58:00 PM
Linda.. Your intimate and introspective write put me into a reflective mood.. Congrats on your significant write and win!
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Date: 9/2/2015 11:56:00 AM
Another awesome poem Linda, :)
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Date: 9/1/2015 11:53:00 PM
Oh no, this is the longest crossover poem. :)
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Date: 8/30/2015 10:25:00 PM
Simply awesome Linda! U have a unique mesmerizing way with words, congrats on big win!
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Date: 8/30/2015 1:44:00 PM
This is an absolute gem of a write. Boy if you have a writers block then I must be frozen over. love phyl
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