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Full Moon reflecting on the snow

The moon is white Of which the light Reflects Off the crystallized Snow beneath Twinkles on the ground Beams into my eyes Allowing a smile To form on my cheeks I put my hand On the snow And feel the cold Frigid emotion below Each sparkle lends A memory Of times gone When I was a child Loving the moon’s Energy far above To play outside Under the glowing Orb I desire the snow And its intensity For it melts On my skin Leaving only water In its place The seeming end To a beauty Of the reflection To the moon’s power Through crystals Upon the path Before me Driven Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/20/2015 6:29:00 PM
Hi Russell, I know you are not active, I'm just here stopping by and enjoying some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 1/6/2015 2:26:00 PM
How gorgeous is this !!! Remarkable write !!! You let me hold that snow flake in my hand !!
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Date: 12/28/2014 1:04:00 PM
powerful piece of writing russell i pray you had a good christmas wishing you a happy new year dear friend
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Date: 12/25/2014 10:43:00 PM
WOW,,,, Russell, Stopping by to say hi, and wish you the best... Enjoy your days and the coming New Year. Love ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/25/2014 3:08:00 PM
Nice poem, Russell. :) john.
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Date: 12/25/2014 3:05:00 PM
russell. you are really back .. enchanting moon = and-snow melody, wow.. special Christmas greetings to you and the family!... huggs
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Date: 12/25/2014 1:42:00 PM
Both picture and words are beautiful...just breathtaking! I hope you are having a wonderful Christmas day with your family, Russell. Many blessings to you, friend...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 12/24/2014 10:19:00 AM
Wow! What a poem and what a picture! Merry Christmas Russell.
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Date: 12/24/2014 9:47:00 AM
What a beautiful, truly awesome write with amazing imagery! I love this piece! Bravo! Warmest regards and best wishes for a wonderful 2015! Pandita.
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Date: 12/24/2014 9:39:00 AM
simply outstanding imagery Russell - this is a delight from start to finish - a 7 from me:-) Hugs jan xx
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