Snow And Tell

Now let me share my shivery story, 
With random revelations shed some light -
Though I’m a dazzling glow but no glory, 
I’m much more than white mesmerising sight. 

I know around the globe I’m frowned upon, 
Shoved aside as unremarkable meme. 
Frosty and I, my boon companion -
Ephemeral scapegoats of Nature’s whim. 

The poignant part that’s so freezin’ unfair, 
Snowbirds and geese leave sweet homeland behind, 
And what the hail, even a grizzly bear 
Under my frozen fist checks out to hide.

I’m well aware that cars are going nuts, 
When on black ice wheels spin out of control, 
I’m traffic’s curse and drivers hate my guts - 
Apologies for my heavy downfall. 

Still silver lining’s part of every cloud -
I’m not warm and affectionate as such, 
But my visage being shovelled and plowed 
Morphs into cool and captivating touch. 

Though I’m made up of many a snowflake - 
Floating frigid and fragile to adore, 
I swear and say for elves and Santa’s sake -
There is white substance to my melting core. 

I’m seasonal and thus a treasured treat, 
I’m well equipped and sell extremely well: 
Without my gifts, apart from slush and sleet, 
Would be no sleighs, no skis, no NHL. 

I’m a commodity just so you know, 
When you can’t smell the roses, seize the snow! 
Let winter’s inhibition cover go -
And Let it glow! Let it glow! Let it glow! 
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Goldsmith Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 10:22 AM
Back with Congratulations on another win. I enjoyed reading your creative/wonderful "Snow And Tell" Personification write again. Have a blessed day writing away...........
Kitchin Avatar
April 5, 2024 at 7:16 PM
Margarita, a fun and creative poem, enjoyed the humor, congratulations on your winning placement.
Anaya Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 10:55 AM
Loved your humor, another great personification! Congratulations!
Gondolf Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 5:33 AM
Thanks for the invite, Snow, but I think I'll leave you to the northerners! A belated congrats on POTD, Maggie. WARM hugs.
Lillico  Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 5:37 AM
Thank you John, I will take warm in any form! XO
Fowler Avatar
March 25, 2024 at 7:27 AM
A fun personification with a play on words throughout. Congratulations on POTD Margarita! :)
Lillico  Avatar
March 25, 2024 at 12:37 PM
Thank you Linda.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 25, 2024 at 6:09 AM
I enjoy a snowfall but haven’t seen even flakes lately! Congratulations on POTD, Margarita!
Lillico  Avatar
March 25, 2024 at 12:37 PM
Thank you Kim.
Daniel Avatar
March 24, 2024 at 10:18 PM
Very lovely poem, Margarita:) congratulations on POTD:)
Lillico  Avatar
March 25, 2024 at 12:38 PM
Thank you, Joanna.
Nicole Avatar
March 24, 2024 at 7:30 PM
Even though snow is ' seasonal and a treasured treat. ' Many don't like the mess it makes, and I can understand that. However, I love knowing that each snowflake is different and unique. Just like we are. When it does snow in world, which is a rare occasion. It's beautiful to behold, indeed. Congratulations Margarita, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Lillico  Avatar
March 25, 2024 at 12:37 PM
Thank you Brandy.
Volumes Avatar
March 24, 2024 at 1:12 PM
I will never look at snow the same way again ! Snow's Curriculum Vitae is impeccable. Well done. Surely this is best for the win. Congrats on your POTD
Lillico  Avatar
March 24, 2024 at 1:20 PM
Thank you, adds a volume!
Gorelick Avatar
March 24, 2024 at 10:56 AM
Wow Margarita, I've looked at snow from both sides now! to paraphrase Joni Mitchell from Winnipeg. I get your snow drift, so cool, crisp and shimmering. Loved it, Robert!
Lillico  Avatar
March 24, 2024 at 11:36 AM
Thank you, Robert. Now I know it all about snow:)
Kauffman Avatar
March 24, 2024 at 10:13 AM
Indeed, winter is a valuable "commodity!" Without hibernation nature has insomnia and every other season suffers. Love the play on words, personification - "what the hail." Such originality and fun! Have to admit I do love winter, even it's downsides of slick roads, frigid temperatures and barrenness! Congratulations on your POTD! Blessings to you!
Lillico  Avatar
March 24, 2024 at 11:38 AM
Thank you, Sam. I cope with it, roads being least favourite aspect :)
Baker Avatar
March 24, 2024 at 10:00 AM
I enjoyed your Personification poem, "Snow and Tell". Congratulations on your POTD honor, Margarita! Enjoy your special day on recognition. Bill
Lillico  Avatar
March 24, 2024 at 11:39 AM
Thank you, Bill. Dealing with blizzard of nice comments indeed:)
Empress Avatar
March 24, 2024 at 9:46 AM
Back to congratulate you on receiving POTD. Well deserved. I loved this personification
Lillico  Avatar
March 24, 2024 at 9:51 AM
Thank you again!
May Avatar
March 24, 2024 at 8:07 AM
Congrats on POTD, Wonderful write
Lillico  Avatar
March 24, 2024 at 9:02 AM
Thank you, Joseph.
Turner Avatar
March 24, 2024 at 8:06 AM
Hello Maggie:) Congratulations on POTD honors. Wonderful personification of winter with a touch of humor. Great to see your work appreciated. Keep writing. You are an excellent poet:)
Lillico  Avatar
March 24, 2024 at 9:02 AM
Thank you Daniel! When nature deals snow turn it into humour:)
Goldsmith Avatar
March 24, 2024 at 7:24 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your creative/wonderful "Snow And Tell" write with a a great ending. Have a wonderful day with your win..........................
Lillico  Avatar
March 24, 2024 at 7:25 AM
Thank you, Paula.
Bowring Avatar
March 24, 2024 at 6:47 AM
Many congratulations Margarita ( lovely name) on POTD with this delightful read. This is a great personification. It’s so clever and amusing with your choice of words. The last stanza is brilliant. Really enjoyed it :):)
Lillico  Avatar
March 24, 2024 at 6:51 AM
Thank you so much, Christina.
Rodgers Avatar
March 24, 2024 at 6:22 AM
Dear Margarita, A very delightful journey through the wintry landscape, capturing the essence of snow in all its complexity. I loved your playful yet insightful verses unravel the multifaceted nature of this cold marvel, celebrating its beauty amidst the challenges it poses. Winning Poem of the Day is a testament to your skill in blending words into a captivating poem. Congratulations on this well-deserved honor. Margarita, keep enchanting us with your lyrical prowess. - Blessings, Daniel
Lillico  Avatar
March 24, 2024 at 6:32 AM
Thank you, Daniel. Living in Canada helps the inspiration:)
Ray Choudhury Avatar
March 24, 2024 at 5:09 AM
Oh how beautiful - the ending line is superb! Congratulations on your honour of POTD - your descriptive poem is simply stunning!
Lillico  Avatar
March 24, 2024 at 6:36 AM
Thank you, Malabika. All well that ends well regardless how cold:)
Mcintosh Avatar
March 24, 2024 at 4:36 AM
Lovely writing. Enjoyed. God bless you and Congrats on POTD. Love, Gina
Lillico  Avatar
March 24, 2024 at 6:36 AM
Thank you, Regina.
Cunningham Avatar
March 24, 2024 at 4:12 AM
Brrr I can feel the chill in your verse Margarita, congratulations to you on the honour of POTD. Tom
Lillico  Avatar
March 24, 2024 at 6:37 AM
We brrr well into April:) Thank you, Tom.
Andresen Avatar
March 24, 2024 at 3:30 AM
- An excellent personification poem, Margarita :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - Have a lovely Easter :) - hugs
Lillico  Avatar
March 24, 2024 at 6:39 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise, might dig the snow to find Easter eggs in Canada.:)
Jones Avatar
March 24, 2024 at 2:58 AM
What a clever engaging potd! Congratulations!
Lillico  Avatar
March 24, 2024 at 6:34 AM
Thanks Karen. Cold clever:)
Edmonds  Avatar
March 24, 2024 at 1:28 AM
A fabulous tale from the snow Margarita, a superb read, very cleverly done. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl
Lillico  Avatar
March 24, 2024 at 6:31 AM
Thank you and thank you Beryl.
Empress Avatar
March 23, 2024 at 1:31 PM
Dear margarita, i really love this personification, and how you’ve phrased lines throughout this well articulated poem truly is impressive and impeccable! Left me in awe! Of how youv written some lines such as “ freezing unfair “ “ what the hail” “ and the ending is brilliant! So unique and creative i love the flow of this and how you’ve depicted snow in such eloquence. Fave this is for me. Best wishes for the contest .
Lillico  Avatar
March 23, 2024 at 1:43 PM
Thank you, warmed and melted :)
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