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Snow - a sleep descending on the twilight streets; Snow, in silent fields you lie pristine beneath moon’s glow, a blanket shimmering. Oblivion serene! Tranquilly envelop me in Sleep - a snow; the more you fall, the deeper that I go under. Oh, sweet Slumber, suffocate with pearly flakes those of us the weary that repose, long time having waited like the windrows. As Boreas does blow, lull and bury all in drifting, dreamy snow. Written 7/11/15 'Absolutely Anything' Poetry Contest of Shreya LN

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Date: 2/12/2022 7:32:00 AM
Andrea, a beautiful rhyming poem and congratulations on having it published in the PS It's Still Poetry Anthology ~Constance
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Date: 1/30/2021 8:31:00 PM
Andrea, A restful silent prayer for peaceful sleep. 'As Boreas does blow, lull and bury all in drifting, dreamy snow.' The snow buries all in mystery of silent reverie in this lovely poem. -Richard
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Date: 10/4/2020 2:32:00 AM
Lulling me to sleep, well written, Andrea, congratulations:)
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Date: 10/3/2020 4:28:00 PM
There is a deep endless peace in this marvelous stack of emotion! Loved it. Lonna
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Date: 10/3/2020 3:48:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poem, congratulations on your win. X
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Date: 10/3/2020 2:46:00 PM
Thanks to my large monitor--I thought you said 'windows', unwavering theme overall, Andrea, entertains my expounded Indian Summer, blessings on your honorable placement, Aloha! William
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Date: 3/15/2019 10:59:00 AM
Such a beautiful and peaceful feeling you create with this lovely poem that mirrors the deep tranquility of snow with that sweet slumber. Andrea. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/13/2019 3:49:00 PM
Great word choices in this fluid poem. Congrats on your placement! Poetic hugs, Juliet.
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Date: 3/13/2019 1:55:00 PM
Andrea, your poem makes me miss the snow! We didn't have any snow at all this winter; and now all we have is pollen covering everything and trees blooming and warm weather! Congratulations on your win on Mile 23 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest! Only 4 contests to go before the final! ~Mark
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Date: 3/13/2019 1:18:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats on your win, Andrea.
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Date: 4/13/2018 8:55:00 PM
Lovely, Andrea. It almost makes me miss the snow.
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Date: 1/25/2017 8:38:00 PM
I love your metaphor, Andrea. Never thought of sleep being like snow, but you paint a very peaceful image. Congrats.
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Date: 1/24/2017 2:26:00 PM
I really enjoyed this piece. Congrats Andrea, for your WIN in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 1/24/2017 1:54:00 PM
Great write and win Andrea...Congrats
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Date: 1/24/2017 10:12:00 AM
oh wow, what a great metaphor Andrea! lovely poem, and congrats :)-luloo
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Date: 1/24/2017 4:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this serene poem.
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Date: 1/24/2017 3:25:00 AM
This is a really beautiful well composed piece Andrea! I am so happy to see it on the list of winners. For me it is a poet's poem...in other words a poem that can really be appreciated for its creativity. I love it and am going to fave it! ; ) 7
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Date: 1/24/2017 1:19:00 AM
Marvellous poem, Andrea congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/11/2017 9:08:00 PM
Dreamy poem, Andrea. Love it. And, congrats on your placement in the contest. Carole
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Date: 1/5/2017 1:42:00 PM
Love the reference to Boreas! Cool poem (in both senses of the word) Congrats on your win Andrea! :-)
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Date: 1/5/2017 6:09:00 AM
A wonderful analogy Andrea...Congrats on a great win
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Date: 1/5/2017 3:08:00 AM
Congrats!
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Date: 1/4/2017 10:35:00 PM
Words like pearly flakes scintillating in this poem. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/4/2017 2:44:00 PM
Great imagery plus the flow of thoughts. Superb. Congrats!
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Date: 5/13/2016 9:21:00 PM
Congrats on your win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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