Snow

S O Acrostrain N W Sparkle, you wee glistening flake. North winds gently toss you around. Oh, what lovely vision you make, Wearing your white crystalline gown. 10/23/15

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John Lawless

Date: 12/13/2015 4:36:00 PM

Lin, the snow title blowing around is great, had me smiling before I even read the poem. Congrats on your placement in the contest

Lin Lane
Date: 12/13/2015 4:38:00 PM

Thanks, John. Every once in a great while my brain works..;)

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 12/11/2015 8:25:00 AM

Congratulations Lin.

Lin Lane
Date: 12/11/2015 8:27:00 AM

Thanks so much, Nayda.

Skat A

Date: 12/10/2015 12:54:00 PM

Lin, Congratulations with your wonderful win! *SKAT*

Lin Lane
Date: 12/11/2015 8:27:00 AM

Thanks, skat.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/9/2015 10:28:00 PM

Yet another wonderful write Lin.. congrats on great win!

Lin Lane
Date: 12/10/2015 2:06:00 AM

Thanks a bunch, Upma.

Julia Ward

Date: 10/26/2015 9:26:00 AM

A charming write, for which a 7. Julia, xx

Lin Lane
Date: 10/26/2015 10:11:00 AM

for which I humbly say, Thank you, Julia.

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/25/2015 9:33:00 AM

Hi Lin, I love the way you did this Acrostrain for the contest! What wonderful imagery of the journey of a lone snowflake! All the best for the contest. 7, Hugs, Sandra

Lin Lane
Date: 10/25/2015 10:02:00 AM

Many thanks, Sandra. I could only speak of one flake because all the others would be wearing a different brilliant gown of their own design. I'm grateful for your comments and the 7. ~ Lin ~

Genevieve Mika-Stevens

Date: 10/24/2015 7:16:00 PM

This little poem had such a nice ring to it when reading it aloud...lovely!

Lin Lane
Date: 10/24/2015 8:08:00 PM

Thank you, Genevieve. Not many read aloud, but it adds another dimension to poetry. I sometimes do it as well. Thank you for your visit and kind compliments.

Michael Tor

Date: 10/24/2015 2:31:00 AM

Cleverly written Lin.

Lin Lane
Date: 10/24/2015 6:43:00 AM

Thank you for reading me, Michael. Keep visiting.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/23/2015 9:03:00 PM

a sweet one. I love how you arranged the title at the top! I see you commenting to Paul but he won't see that reply to him unless you click on his name and tell him at his poem.

Lin Lane
Date: 10/23/2015 9:06:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea, for the comment and the information. I sent it in the proper place...I think.

Paul Callus

Date: 10/23/2015 3:37:00 PM

How lovely this is, Lin! The snowflake dancing in her crystalline gown appeals to my heart! #7 ~ Regards // paul

Lin Lane
Date: 10/23/2015 9:05:00 PM

Thank you for reading and for the comments, Paul. I'm glad she was appealing.