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Poetry/Personification/Snow
Copyright Protected, ID 03-1631-572-23
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France

Written, March 23, 2024
For the International Contest, Wind, Rain, Snow, or Thunder
Sponsor, Tania Kitchin, Judged 04/05/2024

First Place

ice mage with blue eyes" - Playground

Oh, this is your beloved Snow whispering, please, do not forsake me for that Prince Spring; you love my snowflake caress on your cheek, and my frozen kisses upon your red lips, let me wrap my cold around you; and take you to that winter wonderland you love ! Oh, dearest the air is no longer cold enough, and I am fading . . . I will be gone away soon; but, fear not I will return when north winds blow, and you will run to your beloved Snow; holding me in your hands and whispering sweet love, and we will walk the frozen forests again !

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 4/8/2024 4:40:00 PM

A beautiful love letter to Snow, Constance. Such an original take on the theme with a pensive, slightly melancholy air! Congratulations on your win! Easter season blessings and Alleluia to you!

Constance La France
Date: 4/10/2024 2:09:00 PM

Sam, thank you for the compliment, comment, and congratulations, hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/7/2024 8:12:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful/creative "Snow" write/story/picture. Have a blessed day writing away...........

Constance La France
Date: 4/7/2024 9:29:00 AM

Paula, thank you for the congratulations, and compliment, hugs

Tania Kitchin

Date: 4/5/2024 4:15:00 PM

Constance, a wonderful personification poem, love the ending, congratulations on your first place win,

Constance La France
Date: 4/6/2024 4:21:00 PM

Tania, thank you for the contest and my wonderful placement and for the compliment and congratulations, hugs

Jay Narain

Date: 3/24/2024 11:26:00 AM

Beautiful personification of winter. All seasons have their own place and charm. We love them all.

Constance La France
Date: 3/26/2024 8:19:00 AM

Jay, thank you for the compliment and comment, hugs, Constance

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/23/2024 2:42:00 PM

you have such a beautiful way of writing personification poetry. Your words were eloquently written. I thought capitalizing 'Snow' was effective, giving it respect and honor. I enjoyed every subtle line with delicate detail. I especially liked 'we will walk the frozen forests again.' Best wishes with the contest, hugs & blessings, sara

Constance La France
Date: 3/26/2024 8:20:00 AM

Sara, thank you for the compliment, lovely comment and encouragement, hugs, Constance