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Poetry/Anacreontic Couplet/SNOW
Copyright Protected, ID 12-1610-446-22
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written, December 22, 2023
For the International Contest, Anacreontic Couplets
Sponsor, Silent One, Judged 01/01/2024

First Place

the Lady of Imladris — Dashing Through the Snow

"Love, like poetry, knows no barriers, no boundaries ... for all things are possible." Quote by _Constance I have a love that is deep, and he likes to dance and leap; his hair is white falling snow, when I hear him- I let go; and to him I surrender, his caresses so tender; with long frozen fingers cold, his snow arms wrap and enfold. I have loved him forever, but this fancy is never, unless I become snow too, oh, could magic become true ! I look at his tortured face, his cold lips I kiss and trace.

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Date: 1/12/2024 6:05:00 PM
Dear Constance, congratulations for your wonderful win in Silent One's contest with your exceptional poem. Beautiful emotive imagery. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Constance La France
Date: 1/13/2024 5:54:00 AM
Susan, thank you so much for the congratulations, compliment and lovely comment, blessings, Constance
Date: 1/3/2024 7:34:00 PM
Congratulations! Lovely imagery and playful too!
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Date: 1/13/2024 5:55:00 AM
Kim, thank you so much for the congratulations and compliment, blessings, Constance
Date: 1/3/2024 10:02:00 AM
This is so cool with that short video clip. Big congrats, Constance.
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Date: 1/13/2024 5:55:00 AM
Andrea, thank you so much for the compliment and congrats, blessings, Constance
Date: 1/1/2024 10:44:00 AM
This was really creative.. a lovely love story. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Constance La France
Date: 1/13/2024 5:56:00 AM
Silent, thank you so much for the contest and my placement, and for the compliment, comment and congratulations, blessings, Constance
Date: 12/22/2023 4:35:00 PM
outstanding, Constance...when I first started reading I thought your poem was a romantic poem, but then it seems its more about loving him (the snow) forever? My mind is a little mushy today after having had surgery yesterday...Anyway, I enjoyed the read, Sara
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Constance La France
Date: 12/26/2023 1:14:00 PM
Sara, thank you so much for the compliment and comment, hope you are feeling better, blessings
Date: 12/22/2023 7:26:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Snow" write/picture. Good Luck... Merry Christmas..................
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Constance La France
Date: 12/22/2023 7:54:00 AM
Paula, thank you so much for the comment and compliment, Merry Christmas blessings

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