Snow

I will be coming soon to you Millions of flakes, starting with few Purity in blistering wind Untouched, as if nothing has sinned And my blanket will cover ground Where new steps in life can be found I will shine tree branches with white Hold shadows painted by sunlight I will cover the hills to ski Crested mountain tops, you will see Every day will bring a new chance For my sparkles to light your day From fresh snowflakes I'll bring your way Heidi Sands 10/26/22

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Joseph May

Date: 10/27/2022 2:25:00 AM

Those snowflakes will be swirling soon, Wonderful write Heidi, hugs

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/27/2022 5:26:00 AM

Yes they will be Joseph. Thank you. Hugs :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/26/2022 8:24:00 PM

Your cheery tone and sunny, sparkling imagery make me, uh, er, well ---- almost like snow. ~ Not a Snow Bunny, I'm afraid

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/27/2022 5:26:00 AM

Nice ! Just focus on the beauty, not the shoveling lol. I hope you have a nice day. Thank you :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/26/2022 6:04:00 PM

Heidi, you have created stunning imagery with the shimmering trees and the crowned mountain peaks. Your poetry evokes images from the time of year when snow blankets the countryside.

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/27/2022 5:24:00 AM

Thank you for such a kind comment, my friend :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/26/2022 2:27:00 PM

Your poem brings forth the scenes from the season of snow blanketing the landscape, Heidi. Beautiful images of shining trees and crested mountaintops.

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/26/2022 3:18:00 PM

Thank you Vijay. I do enjoy the snow covered mountain views. I appreciate your visit. :)