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I see their ghosts ... dancing before me like madmen like moon-daubed scarecrows of the corn hurling curses like daggers (righteous retribution) ... I see their eyes ... the gleams change to glaze with every considerate nuzzle of the trigger recoil punching my shoulder (yin to a horrid yang) ... I see their sorrow ... in a last instant of confusion the tear that will birth a thousand more from the dear ones left behind (even these ... loved) ... I see their smiles ... the glow of sensate jubilation for the fiery hell I have doomed myself to a calamitous conflagration, eternal (damnation ... for duty) ... In my dreams ... I see.

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Date: 5/22/2021 3:02:00 PM
Realistic feelings of a soldier so masterfully expressed in your poem. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/10/2021 8:45:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Date: 3/27/2020 12:16:00 PM
Gregory congrats on your top win!;)
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Date: 1/6/2020 8:20:00 PM
Excellent! I was just watching “The Hiding Place” where one woman didn’t want the reaponsibility of someone’s death, though he was a traitor. I can’t imagine!
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Date: 1/6/2020 2:42:00 PM
The terrors of war keep on afflicting the soldiers long after their tour is gone. I often wonder how they expect someone trained to kill to be reintegrated back into society without any troubles. So many soldiers here live on the streets, so sad!
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