Snappers

There once was a Chick from the sea whose two buxom breasts were set free. Twin seaweed straps snapped as thunder clouds clapped and the sailors drown ecstatically.

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Samir Georges

Date: 3/3/2010 2:25:00 PM

The grin on my face when i finished this! Ah to the fav.'s list it goes!

Jared Pickett

Date: 3/3/2010 9:20:00 AM

There are many wonderful limericks on the hot list.... EXCELLENT poem my friend.....:JP]

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/2/2010 10:53:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest Deb. Love, Carol

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/1/2010 9:00:00 PM

Hilarious!! My congratulations on your win in the contest, Deborah! Peace, Audrey

Mike Butler

Date: 3/1/2010 12:53:00 PM

Very cute! Congrats on your success. -Mike

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/1/2010 11:09:00 AM

Great Limerick. Great fun. Congratulations. Joyce

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/1/2010 5:47:00 AM

congrats on the win!! different take, I like it.

James Fraser

Date: 3/1/2010 3:44:00 AM

Ha ha kool Limerick Deborah, i am delighted for you being placed in Carolyn's fine contest >> James

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/1/2010 12:16:00 AM

It’s a fish eat fish world out there! Congratulations Deborah, you swam to the top of the pond with your winning placement in Carolyn Devonshire’s Sea Tale Limerick contest. It is so funny! I liked it a lot on my previous read. (Imagine bubbles floating around the following words!) Bask in the fun of the winners circle. You deserve it. Big Smiles! Lovingly, Dane Ann

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/28/2010 11:57:00 PM

THIS was MY first place winner, Deb. And that one that had a fish farting with a bubble. Who did that one? Congrats, LADY!!

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 2/28/2010 9:14:00 PM

Yes, Miss Deborah, this one is delightfully blue, if the old roue may say so. There was no lacking of wit and clever turns of the phrase in this contest. Carolyn did a good job with this and I, for one, would love to see more of them. I know that everyone had a good time with this one. I certainly did. Kudos, my dear. Regards, Gerard.

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 2/28/2010 8:11:00 PM

Wow! Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest. Sea you!!! Love, Iolanda

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/28/2010 6:59:00 PM

Hope that Chick from the sea, wasn't a flash in the pan! :) Congrats on your win, Debbie...so funny!!

John Freeman

Date: 2/28/2010 6:54:00 PM

Congratulations on your place Deb. Sincere, Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/28/2010 6:40:00 PM

Congrats Debbie on your winning poem in the Limerick contest.. this sure got my vote .. an amusing write and a wonderful win for u to enjoy.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/28/2010 6:17:00 PM

Quite an embarrassing image! Congratulations on your success in my contest. Love, Carolyn

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/27/2010 5:50:00 PM

Deb, this is FUNNY! I hope you entered it in Carolyn's contest. (I wish I could think of a funny sea limerick. I entered one, but it's a bit...average. But the best that I could come up with.) Good luck in the contest. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 2/27/2010 4:08:00 PM

Brilliant. DÉirdre

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/26/2010 2:04:00 PM

this one is definitely the better of the two, by the way. Did you others also? I will check. .

Brian Strand

Date: 2/25/2010 11:24:00 PM

Thank you for your welcome blog comments Debbie.Rgds Brian

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/25/2010 11:07:00 PM

AWESOME, THUNDEROUS applause. YOu can sure write a limerick, Deb, and in true to form RAUNCHY style!! (hey once again , great minds think alike, check out MY limerick's title!) Soup mail

Cecil Hickman

Date: 2/25/2010 10:32:00 PM

a very sensual limerick indeed which told how they were freed,lightening did the deed,very very cute one to succeed,,,i enjoyed this one so very much,,,,Thank you for always visiting and leaving such wonderful notes behind,,,Blessings..Cecil

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/25/2010 7:16:00 PM

BOOM BOOM has arrived.. Deb this is a phenom of a write.. good luck if for the contest.. last line.. to die for... those sailors died happy... BOOM BOOM on the brain..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/25/2010 5:31:00 PM

Great sea Limerick. Good luck in the contest. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara