Snails Pace

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Shaped Haiku 2 Sponsored by JCB Brul
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[summer used to go 
so slow, a snails gooey pace
age began the race]

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 8/2/2025 10:47:00 PM
Belated Big Congrats on your first place win too my dear poet friend, Crystol! Cheers! Sorry for the late read/visit, God bless you always and your poetry! Hugs
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Date: 7/17/2025 2:48:00 PM
This is beautiful, intricate. Patterns are a lot of work but worth the wait! What you created is very clever, Crystol. Congratulations on your win! Love the clock xhugs
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Date: 7/17/2025 2:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning work in this creative contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Sara K
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Date: 7/17/2025 4:25:00 AM
This is so ingeniously done. Congratulations Crystol on your first place win.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 7/17/2025 10:47:00 AM
Tysm! Xo
Date: 7/16/2025 9:18:00 PM
lovely. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
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Crystol Woods
Date: 7/17/2025 10:47:00 AM
Ty! Xo
Date: 7/16/2025 11:04:00 AM
I really really like this one. Great rhyming KU and idea for this contest. Congrats.
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Date: 7/16/2025 11:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your first place win poet friend in this contest with a lyrical write, contrasting the change in pace of life and activities with modernity, well demonstrated by the shape of the Haiku. Wish you a cheerful day.
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Date: 7/16/2025 10:41:00 AM
Thanks for your observations on Noughts And Crosses. Congratulations on your selection. I found this entry inventive, insightful and presented in a challenging design that underpins its theme Howard
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Date: 7/16/2025 10:18:00 AM
A beautiful illustration with beautiful words
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Date: 7/8/2025 4:30:00 AM
I love the little "hi!" at the end. such a fun & creative haiku.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 7/8/2025 11:39:00 AM
.......@_/" hi!
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Crystol Woods
Date: 7/8/2025 11:37:00 AM
That's just my little buddy, the snail! ;) thanks so much! Xo
Date: 7/2/2025 3:06:00 PM
Very inventive! Is it for the newest shape contest!
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Crystol Woods
Date: 7/3/2025 11:45:00 AM
I don't know if giving tips and suggestions to improve ones poetry is something you do but if it is, id love a pointer or two! Either here in mail or on fb msger. <3
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Crystol Woods
Date: 7/3/2025 11:42:00 AM
Yess! You won the last one so your endorsement makes me hopeful! Xo
Date: 7/2/2025 12:19:00 PM
Your "Snails Pace" is a creative write/shape/picture. Love It... "Good Luck" Have a fun day writing away...............
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Crystol Woods
Date: 7/3/2025 11:42:00 AM
Thanks so much! Xo
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