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Smoldering

She feels the need rising up from her core
Ever waiting to burst into fire
Insatiable, always in need for more

Smoldering ember of her desire 
Orange heat pulsating from deep within
Ever waiting to burst into fire

No breeze can cool this, her hot searing skin
Savage her need to combust into flame
Orange heat pulsating from deep within 

Her galloping passion wild and not tame
She rides fiery flares all through the night
Savage her need to combust into flame

The hunger in her eyes makes him ignite
She pulls him into her internal blaze
She rides fiery flares all through the night

His body kindling that lights in her gaze
She feels the need rising up from her core
She pulls him into the internal blaze
Insatiable, always in need of more

Eileen Manassian Ghali

Copyright © Eileen Manassian | Year Posted 2015

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Debbie Guzzi Date: 6/11/2015 9:29:00 AM Very womanly but at the same time childlike?Light & Love Login to Reply

Funom Makama Date: 5/28/2015 10:23:00 AM Great lines with majestic eloquence.. Your meandering of words still did not prevent your peice from giving out its message. This is an absolute 7! Login to Reply

Viv Wigley Date: 5/24/2015 11:48:00 PM Hot stuff! And not easy typing this whilst wearing Nomex gloves. #7. Viv x Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 5/25/2015 1:39:00 PM Oh? Thanks, Viv. I appreciate the visit! :) Will be by to visit you soon. Hugs

Shane Cooper Date: 5/24/2015 7:55:00 PM I have to add, The pictures are spectacular. And this is a 7 and a favourite. Love Shanexxxx Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 5/25/2015 1:41:00 PM :) Glad you like the pics. Took some time to find them. I had another one in mind, but....lost it! :( These will do.

Shane Cooper Date: 5/24/2015 7:52:00 PM Ah! My enchantress you have returned with such beautiful burning passion. Your insatiable hunger engulfs all who fall under your spell. The words with which you paint your canvas have it smouldering ready to ignite with one caress. How can any man fail but to ignite from your savage firery desire. You are passion incarnate dearest enchatress. Welcome home, love Shane xxxx Login to Reply Shane Cooper Date: 5/25/2015 5:16:00 PM Hi, Just really glad to have you back here with your friends where you can flourish! love Shane xxx Eileen Manassian Date: 5/25/2015 1:41:00 PM Hi, Shane. :) Enchantress is one of my favorite names! :) To be passion incarnate would make me a very happy lady! I do love writing on this theme. I love other writers who are able to write on it as well. You are very kind in your words, Shane. Thanks ever so much for the delightful visit to this piece. Hugs

Paul Callus Date: 5/24/2015 2:14:00 PM The smouldering embers of desire can be seen in her eyes...insatiable. And he can't resist the temptation! Lovely and passionate terzanelle, Eileen. [Is your defense this week? If so, good luck.] hugs // paul Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 5/25/2015 2:27:00 PM Will be thinking of you:) Eileen Manassian Date: 5/25/2015 1:46:00 PM This is a post I love to read, Paul. Thank you, my dear. Yes, my defense is soon, June 4. Please pray for me. I'm working on the reference list still. I need to work on the powerpoint for the presentation. Thursday, June 4, is my heaviest teaching day, so I hope that I'm alert enough at 5:00 pm for the presentation. You know...I'm only worried about my emotional state. So much rides on that. ;) Pray for me. I need this all behind me. :) Thanks for asking...Hugs

Kp Nunez Date: 5/24/2015 11:07:00 AM Smoldering, blazing hot terzanelle! The form is perfect for the subject and you've written with such talent and skill that I wonder how come you were able to post without a computer combustion! lol! As I said, between you and FJ, it's back to warm weather at Soup! A 7, of course. hugs! Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 5/24/2015 1:16:00 PM I adore FJ for her ability to write sensual poetry. :) Thank you, Kim. I do like to write on these them. I have one right now in the works. I appreciate the visit. Hugs

Richard Lamoureux Date: 5/24/2015 9:08:00 AM I also like the photos you added. Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 5/24/2015 9:20:00 AM I had another one, but I lost that pic. Glad you liked these...I search a long time to find what I like. :) Hugs

Richard Lamoureux Date: 5/24/2015 7:27:00 AM This is a ooh la la hot repost Eileen. Great use of repetition to create a passionate response. I can feel the heat eminating from the page! Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 5/24/2015 8:51:00 AM You are the terzanelle king, so I will take your word for it, Richard. I hope that I got it right. This form has never been easy for me. You make it flawless. Got my Oooh la la, so I'm happy. :) Hugs

Laura Breidenthal Date: 5/24/2015 4:23:00 AM Absolutely STUNNING piece, Eileen! Love the refrain as well, so perfect! Always, Laura Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 5/24/2015 7:02:00 AM Thanks, Laura. You always bring such positivity with your posts. I am so appreciative. Thanks, hon. Hugs

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 5/24/2015 2:59:00 AM That's real passionate my dear Eileen! Ur each word ignites ! Bravo !! Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 5/24/2015 7:03:00 AM I've missed you Dr Upma. :) Good to have this lovely visit. Thank you for visiting me. :) Hugs

Skat A Date: 5/24/2015 12:22:00 AM WOw, Eileen, that is steamy. Love it. SKAT Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 5/24/2015 7:04:00 AM Steamy dreamy is the way I like it. Thanks, Skat. :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/23/2015 10:51:00 PM ooh la la, Eileen. your terzanelle smolders. What a great way to use that form!! Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 5/24/2015 7:05:00 AM Thanks, Andrea. It's actually a repost, but I find Terzanelle hard to do, so I thought I'd post something I'd already done and see the reactions. This is great. Thanks!

Laura Leiser Date: 5/23/2015 1:29:00 PM You're BACK! And igniting a fiery blaze as you so skillfully do! Great write :) Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 5/24/2015 7:08:00 AM Thanks, Laura. Yes, I'm back. Using my real name again. :) Thanks for the lovely visit. Will swing around soon!

Kim Merryman Date: 5/23/2015 1:13:00 PM An extremely passionate and sensual write! Great work, Eileen! Love, Kim Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 5/24/2015 7:08:00 AM Thanks, dear Kim. I'm so glad you liked it. Hugs to you!

Nandita Das Date: 5/23/2015 12:24:00 PM Blazing hot, hot, hot!!! 7 Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 5/24/2015 7:09:00 AM Need a fan??? ;) ;) ;) Thanks, dear.

Emile Pinet Date: 5/23/2015 12:09:00 PM Your poem is sensual, the story line was well laid out with passion burning through the words. A well written engrossing poem filled with sexual energy that electrify the carnal currents that flow throughout your words. Emile. #7 Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 5/24/2015 7:11:00 AM :) Why thank you, Emile. This was a lovely visit and post. I'm very touched by your lovely analysis of my work. Hugs...BTW...your name has always been a favorite of mine. I started working on a novel when I was fifteen...the broken man....The love interest of the heroine who died in a war was EMILE. :)

Tim Smith Date: 5/23/2015 11:34:00 AM Sheee's baaack....sizzle Login to Reply Eileen Manassian Date: 5/24/2015 7:12:00 AM YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!! And up to her tricks! :) Thanks for the visit time. Sizzle is a lovely word.