Eileen Manassian Poet Terzanelle

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Smoldering

She feels the need rising up from her core
Ever waiting to burst into fire
Insatiable, always in need for more

Smoldering ember of her desire 
Orange heat pulsating from deep within
Ever waiting to burst into fire

No breeze can cool this, her hot searing skin
Savage her need to combust into flame
Orange heat pulsating from deep within 

Her galloping passion wild and not tame
She rides fiery flares all through the night
Savage her need to combust into flame

The hunger in her eyes makes him ignite
She pulls him into her internal blaze
She rides fiery flares all through the night

His body kindling that lights in her gaze
She feels the need rising up from her core
She pulls him into the internal blaze
Insatiable, always in need of more

Eileen Manassian Ghali

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Debbie Guzzi June 11, 2015 at 9:29 AM Very womanly but at the same time childlike?Light & Love

Funom Makama May 28, 2015 at 10:23 AM Great lines with majestic eloquence.. Your meandering of words still did not prevent your peice from giving out its message. This is an absolute 7!

Viv Wigley May 24, 2015 at 11:48 PM Hot stuff! And not easy typing this whilst wearing Nomex gloves. #7. Viv x Eileen Manassian May 25, 2015 at 1:39 PM Oh? Thanks, Viv. I appreciate the visit! :) Will be by to visit you soon. Hugs

Shane Cooper May 24, 2015 at 7:55 PM I have to add, The pictures are spectacular. And this is a 7 and a favourite. Love Shanexxxx Eileen Manassian May 25, 2015 at 1:41 PM :) Glad you like the pics. Took some time to find them. I had another one in mind, but....lost it! :( These will do.

Shane Cooper May 24, 2015 at 7:52 PM Ah! My enchantress you have returned with such beautiful burning passion. Your insatiable hunger engulfs all who fall under your spell. The words with which you paint your canvas have it smouldering ready to ignite with one caress. How can any man fail but to ignite from your savage firery desire. You are passion incarnate dearest enchatress. Welcome home, love Shane xxxx Shane Cooper May 25, 2015 at 5:16 PM Hi, Just really glad to have you back here with your friends where you can flourish! love Shane xxx Eileen Manassian May 25, 2015 at 1:41 PM Hi, Shane. :) Enchantress is one of my favorite names! :) To be passion incarnate would make me a very happy lady! I do love writing on this theme. I love other writers who are able to write on it as well. You are very kind in your words, Shane. Thanks ever so much for the delightful visit to this piece. Hugs

Paul Callus May 24, 2015 at 2:14 PM The smouldering embers of desire can be seen in her eyes...insatiable. And he can't resist the temptation! Lovely and passionate terzanelle, Eileen. [Is your defense this week? If so, good luck.] hugs // paul Paul Callus May 25, 2015 at 2:27 PM Will be thinking of you:) Eileen Manassian May 25, 2015 at 1:46 PM This is a post I love to read, Paul. Thank you, my dear. Yes, my defense is soon, June 4. Please pray for me. I'm working on the reference list still. I need to work on the powerpoint for the presentation. Thursday, June 4, is my heaviest teaching day, so I hope that I'm alert enough at 5:00 pm for the presentation. You know...I'm only worried about my emotional state. So much rides on that. ;) Pray for me. I need this all behind me. :) Thanks for asking...Hugs

Kp Nunez May 24, 2015 at 11:07 AM Smoldering, blazing hot terzanelle! The form is perfect for the subject and you've written with such talent and skill that I wonder how come you were able to post without a computer combustion! lol! As I said, between you and FJ, it's back to warm weather at Soup! A 7, of course. hugs! Eileen Manassian May 24, 2015 at 1:16 PM I adore FJ for her ability to write sensual poetry. :) Thank you, Kim. I do like to write on these them. I have one right now in the works. I appreciate the visit. Hugs

Richard Lamoureux May 24, 2015 at 9:08 AM I also like the photos you added. Eileen Manassian May 24, 2015 at 9:20 AM I had another one, but I lost that pic. Glad you liked these...I search a long time to find what I like. :) Hugs

Richard Lamoureux May 24, 2015 at 7:27 AM This is a ooh la la hot repost Eileen. Great use of repetition to create a passionate response. I can feel the heat eminating from the page! Eileen Manassian May 24, 2015 at 8:51 AM You are the terzanelle king, so I will take your word for it, Richard. I hope that I got it right. This form has never been easy for me. You make it flawless. Got my Oooh la la, so I'm happy. :) Hugs

Laura Breidenthal May 24, 2015 at 4:23 AM Absolutely STUNNING piece, Eileen! Love the refrain as well, so perfect! Always, Laura Eileen Manassian May 24, 2015 at 7:02 AM Thanks, Laura. You always bring such positivity with your posts. I am so appreciative. Thanks, hon. Hugs

Dr. Upma A. Sharma May 24, 2015 at 2:59 AM That's real passionate my dear Eileen! Ur each word ignites ! Bravo !! Eileen Manassian May 24, 2015 at 7:03 AM I've missed you Dr Upma. :) Good to have this lovely visit. Thank you for visiting me. :) Hugs

Skat A May 24, 2015 at 12:22 AM WOw, Eileen, that is steamy. Love it. SKAT Eileen Manassian May 24, 2015 at 7:04 AM Steamy dreamy is the way I like it. Thanks, Skat. :)

Andrea Dietrich May 23, 2015 at 10:51 PM ooh la la, Eileen. your terzanelle smolders. What a great way to use that form!! Eileen Manassian May 24, 2015 at 7:05 AM Thanks, Andrea. It's actually a repost, but I find Terzanelle hard to do, so I thought I'd post something I'd already done and see the reactions. This is great. Thanks!

Laura Leiser May 23, 2015 at 1:29 PM You're BACK! And igniting a fiery blaze as you so skillfully do! Great write :) Eileen Manassian May 24, 2015 at 7:08 AM Thanks, Laura. Yes, I'm back. Using my real name again. :) Thanks for the lovely visit. Will swing around soon!

Kim Merryman May 23, 2015 at 1:13 PM An extremely passionate and sensual write! Great work, Eileen! Love, Kim Eileen Manassian May 24, 2015 at 7:08 AM Thanks, dear Kim. I'm so glad you liked it. Hugs to you!

Nandita Das May 23, 2015 at 12:24 PM Blazing hot, hot, hot!!! 7 Eileen Manassian May 24, 2015 at 7:09 AM Need a fan??? ;) ;) ;) Thanks, dear.

Emile Pinet May 23, 2015 at 12:09 PM Your poem is sensual, the story line was well laid out with passion burning through the words. A well written engrossing poem filled with sexual energy that electrify the carnal currents that flow throughout your words. Emile. #7 Eileen Manassian May 24, 2015 at 7:11 AM :) Why thank you, Emile. This was a lovely visit and post. I'm very touched by your lovely analysis of my work. Hugs...BTW...your name has always been a favorite of mine. I started working on a novel when I was fifteen...the broken man....The love interest of the heroine who died in a war was EMILE. :)

Tim Smith May 23, 2015 at 11:34 AM Sheee's baaack....sizzle Eileen Manassian May 24, 2015 at 7:12 AM YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!! And up to her tricks! :) Thanks for the visit time. Sizzle is a lovely word.