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Smoking Hot

Once upon a time there was a little girl
She carried a chipped edged bowl in her hand
Charity had been generous to her riding years
Gifts were ripped, unwanted and unsized clothes
Grandma loved her Red Riding Hood in any wear
She named her so for her cheeks were smoking hot
At the slightest insinuation about her bowl or any form of abuse
She had been wearing a faded small red cloak for years
First, too large sized then, too small in the wintry land
Little Hood begged for her grandma's survival
Who lay bedridden in their shambled home
Red Riding Hood had outgrown her baby size
No longer could she keep her face hidden
In her small hood, thus attracting the bestial wolfish eyes
A wolf befriended her and took some fruit for granny
He held her soft hand as she led him to grandma on bed
Money flowed in, and so did fruit and health
Philanthropy and blessings oozed in every corner
The lusty wolf took his chance as grandma lay to rest
Red faced with smoking hot coal eyes as he grabbed her 
Red Riding grew from adolescence to maturity
With a carving knife and hot pepper spray in his eyes
The wolf and beast were packed off before a howl.
No more begging, no more tears and tatters
Grandma and Red Riding Hood lived happily ever after


February 6, 2016
Contest: Once Upon A Time
Sponsor: Laura Loo

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/8/2016 4:13:00 AM
So sweet a poem. I had also chosen the same poem. Congrats Balveen to win. Anisha D
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/17/2016 6:16:00 AM
Thanks Anisha!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/15/2016 4:40:00 AM
Thanks Anisha!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/14/2016 7:23:00 PM
Thanks Anisha!
Date: 2/7/2016 10:56:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win!!!! :-) Hugs Eve
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/15/2016 4:39:00 AM
Thanks & Love , Eve!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/14/2016 7:23:00 PM
Thanks & Love , Eve!
Date: 2/7/2016 5:18:00 AM
I just got another notification. Thnaks again
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Date: 2/6/2016 8:47:00 PM
you are welcome for the reply
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/7/2016 12:46:00 AM
My pleasure!
Date: 2/6/2016 4:23:00 PM
Balveen, Congratulations on your wonderful "Once Upon A Time Win!!!" Luv ~LINDA~
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/6/2016 8:38:00 PM
Thanks Linda!
Date: 2/6/2016 3:42:00 PM
Love your poem :) Congratulations on your win, Balveen!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/6/2016 8:37:00 PM
That's awfully sweet of you Eve! Thanks!
Date: 2/6/2016 12:11:00 PM
A happy ending...well done in this contest, Balveen.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/6/2016 8:38:00 PM
Thanks Lin!
Date: 2/6/2016 11:53:00 AM
Balveen, congrats on your placement and thank you for being in my contest :)-luloo *smiles*
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/6/2016 8:39:00 PM
Thanks Laura!
Date: 2/6/2016 11:30:00 AM
super congrats on your red-chili win, balveen!..huggs
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/6/2016 8:40:00 PM
Nette, in fact I always find your work super! All the same, thanks and love!

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